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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > Seeking Beta to read Ch. 1 of a romantic suspense.

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message 1: by S. (new)

S. (skline08) | 29 comments Here is just a little sample from it;

The smell of gasoline and burnt flesh fill my nostrils as I enter the tiny upstairs bedroom. The body is sprawled across the burned wooden floors, ash and soot coats darkness over the once blue walls. The body nothing more than a statue among the rubble, a horrific reminder of what had taken place here, a killer’s calling card; the third homicide victim, in this area, in the last three months.

Let me know if you're interested! :)


message 2: by Crystal (new)

Crystal Firsdon | 12 comments What, exactly, are you looking for? When it comes to beta reading, I'm good for some things but not others. Do you just want the general "Does this opening chapter work?"
I'm willing to look at your first chapter. Feel free to email me at crystalfirsdon (at) yahoo (dot) com. Let me know if you have specific concerns, or simply want general feedback.


message 3: by S. (new)

S. (skline08) | 29 comments I'll e-mail it now. I am just looking for general feedback. Likes, dislikes, that sort of thing.


message 4: by Cassie (new)

Cassie (cfite) | 165 comments Cassiefite@yahoo.com


message 5: by Barbara (new)

Barbara Seratt | 5 comments I would love to read it and give you feedback. barbwyre63@gmail.com


message 6: by Erin (new)

Erin (erbuteau) | 10 comments I can help. erbuteau@gmail.com


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