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We continue walking. My legs ache, and I am hungry, but I don't say anything. The sun slowly seta. It is the beginning of winter, and it is freezing outside. I pull on a jacket, and we set up the mata and blankets that Drew packed on the grass./

"G'night." I mumble.

Of course, that's when the trolls appear.


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When I wake up, the first thing I see is marble. Elegant marble floors. I sit up.

My hands and feet are free, and I feel a bit woozy.

"Where am I?" I ask aloud.

A beautiful voice speaks.

"Our realm. The Blackthorn Kingdom. Sorry about the trolls."

A woman adjourned in a white tunic glides towards me.

"You see, we want the Ring. Oh, and did I mention? So does your friend! The good looking one. Yes, dear, that's right. He was leading you to your death."

I hear voice, saying "No, Kal, it's not true! Its my dad!" before I feel a cloth on my face and I pass out.


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"Andrew! Dylan!" I shout at the door.
"Kaleigh!" I hear Dylan shout, but its far away.
"Are you alright?" I ask.
"Uh... a little dizzy, but fine." he replies.


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'The ring is all we want. Give it to us, and you are free to go with your friends and no harm will come to you. Refuse? Refuse our request and you will perish along with you friends. One by one. It read in beautiful handwriting. I my hand shook as I re-read the message to Dylan. "Andrew? You there?" I shout, wondering is where abouts. All I hear is a pained groan from close by.


message 55: by [deleted user] (new)

"oh shoot drew are you ok...are you hurt...dylan is drew with you...is he injured" oh god please let him be fien. please let them be fine


message 56: by [deleted user] (new)

he didn't answer...there was just silence and the i heard the screams


message 57: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (last edited Aug 22, 2014 07:35AM) (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
"Andrew? You okay?" I scream.

"Who cares?" I faintly heard Dylan mumble, but I pushed that aside and kept shouting until finally I heard a tiny voice shout, "I'm fine, Kal, just a little... tired, that's all. Ooh!" Andrew gave a loud groan and I heard a thump.


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"hey u two...find a way out and get here now...you have to read this"


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"There is no escape, young one." A voice hissed through the halls.
"Whos there?" I hear Dylan shout, voice echoing.
"Annida. Troll #674, at your service. Your personal guard 24/7." the scratchy voice replied.


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"what the...k i know im a princess and all but a troll is the last thing on earth i would keep as a garud got it proxy"


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I take out my hidden dagger in the ruffles of my active dress, and went to work on the lock with the tip of my blade. "What do they want with us?" Dylan calls to the troll, distracting him so I could work. "The note has already told you! We want the ring, and the ring only! Now where is it?!" she exclaimed, pounding on the door. I jumped and almost dropped the dagger, but caught it before it clattered to the floor.


message 62: by [deleted user] (new)

I went back to work at the lock, being as quite as I could.


message 63: by [deleted user] (new)

I creep around to the back, and mouth, "I'll be back!" to them. Dylan inclines his head slightly to show he understood.


message 64: by [deleted user] (new)

"Keep her busy." I mouth before I leave, gesturing to the troll woman.


message 65: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 30, 2014 05:11PM) (new)

Andrew immediately starts babbling, while I quietly slip out of the room.


message 66: by [deleted user] (new)

"Perfect!" I think and grab the packs. Once all of them are secure in my arms, I venture a little farther down the halls.


message 67: by [deleted user] (new)

"Do not enter unless you have authorization".

Of course I try to enter. It's locked. No duh.

But now I have weapons! I can probably bust out Dylan and Andrew!

Only one problem. When I re-enter the room...


message 68: by [deleted user] (new)

...The goblin lady would see me. I need a major distraction on the opposite side of the hall. But how...


message 69: by [deleted user] (new)

"Andrew? Dylan?" Kaleigh calls, her voice hoarse.


message 70: by [deleted user] (new)

And then I kill the goblin lady, leave Dylan and rescue Andrew, and we get married and have 100 babies and live happily ever after the end!

Sorry, I just had to do that.

Anyways, just kidding, carry on. (like, pretend I didn't write this)


message 71: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
XDXDXDXDXD great ending, Julane, wanna make a sequel?


message 72: by [deleted user] (new)

Mm hm.

Andrew and Kaleigh then moved to Florida and became multimillionaires. They then went to live in the forest and had lots of babies and money and at crumpets and scones everyday, the end!


message 73: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
let's make it a trilogy!

Then Andrew dies, along with all the kids and Kaleigh is left homeless, husbandless, childless, and rich.....less.....

BUT!!! Dylan also became a multimillionare and swoops to the rescue and saves her and they live happily ever after in Brazil.


message 74: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
The End.


message 75: by [deleted user] (new)

But in the 4th installment, in turns out Dylan is an evil dude who wrestles bears, and wants Kaleighs fortune, so she kills, and lives happily ever after as a strong independent woman.

Oh, and she buys 300 kittens to keep her and her 150 babies company, the end.


message 76: by [deleted user] (new)

The end.


message 77: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Love it.


message 78: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh, and she starts a bakery called the Happy Waffle.

The end.
XD


message 79: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
XD even better


message 80: by [deleted user] (new)

Anyways, though this is what really happened, Mae, Alice, you may continue from where you left off XD


message 81: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
XD I hope our true story doesn't get lost in time...


message 82: by [deleted user] (new)

No, Kaleigh's 150 babies will continue the legend *wipes away emotional tear* XD


message 83: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
*wipes away a bucket of emotional tears* XD


message 84: by [deleted user] (new)

I was thinking it could make a great film adaptation!

"Kaleigh's Fight for Freedom- No husband, babies galore, an independent woman!"

It would be a documentary!


message 85: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
XDXD


message 86: by [deleted user] (new)

Actually, first showing in Orlando, FL..... ya know, where she became a millionaire ;D


message 87: by [deleted user] (new)

I then realize, that it shows me! I am pouring batter into a waffle iron, whistling lightly. The title is, "Cooking with Kaleigh" on Food Network! I scream.

I pass out to the sound of my voice saying, "First, add three eggs..."


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Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments ...


message 89: by [deleted user] (new)

:-)


message 90: by [deleted user] (new)

XD


message 91: by [deleted user] (new)

Soooo... what are we gonna do now with the story?


message 92: by [deleted user] (new)

Make Cooking with Kaleigh. XD sorry I had to


message 93: by [deleted user] (new)

I don't know... XD


message 94: by [deleted user] (new)

Sorry XD you guys could just continue from when Kaleigh is saving Dylan and Andrew....


message 95: by [deleted user] (new)

Oook. I don't wanna go first cause I too laaaazzzzzyyyy...


message 96: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
COOKING WITH KALEIGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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message 98: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
:D


message 99: by [deleted user] (new)

:-)


message 100: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
:)


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