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Jul 29, 2014 02:07PM
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Whoa that is the best so far!!!!!!
I just like all of the ones with snakes on them!
In the end, though, it really doesn't matter to me what the ring looks like, as long as the story is good.
Yeah I should probably get off of the computer....
SO PROUD TUBY..MAYBE NEXT YOU CAN LEARN THE fn BUTTON!!!! ruby wuby's all gwown uuup!!!
Ruby... Just little a question... How can Kaleigh's Father be missing if I wrote that he's with the ministers of Defence and Foreign Affairs mere two hours ago?
oooooooooooooooooooh.....i missed that....oh no..i already posted thier last meeting...maybe he went missign after vistign them..
Oh, whoops, sorry, I guess I read something wrong, I thought he had left her a whole long ago or something... my bad! Will we have to delete my post and Zaynah's post?
Hi guys! How is it going? Sorry if this seems really random. I was only gone about 3 hours, and I come back, BOOM!!! 4 pages to read. I gave up half way through page 2. Can you guys catch me up please? Can I please join, or am I too late?

1. Zaynah
2. Maj
3. Julane
4. Ruby
5. Mae
2. Maj
3. Julane
4. Ruby
5. Mae
I thinks its Maj's turn to write, right?
I don't think this who posts when thing is working out. It takes forever to wait until the next person in line is online.
It's my turn? Oh, [let's keep it PG 13]! I totally forgot....
But I agree with Kmae... The way that you write when you want to write works better. As long as you don't reply on yourself. And if you write at the same time as somebody else, be prepared and willing to change your story-part a bit.
But I agree with Kmae... The way that you write when you want to write works better. As long as you don't reply on yourself. And if you write at the same time as somebody else, be prepared and willing to change your story-part a bit.
Good. Now this is a lot easier...
Good idea...... yeah, I think that now that things have slowed down a bit, that will work better.
And also, this is awesome!!!! But I'm kinda confused, the Moonshadows are the bad guys, sooooo is Andrew a Moonshadow and Kaleigh is a Rowanoak, right? If she was a Moonshadow, she would be evil and couldn't have the ring, she would be after it. Plus her last name wouldn't be Rowanoak. I'm just confused...
omg me too...im confused...she likes dylan or drew...andrew is good or bad...he is a moonshade?...she is a rowanoak? what going on....aaaaand your right...it takes too long to wait for the order!
Kaleigh = Descendant of the Rowanoaks (Kinda like how if my maiden name was Beck, then I got married to a Salazar. I had kids named Sally Salazar. Then she got married to a Luce. She had a kid named Lucy Luce. Lucy has Beck blood in her line. Like how Kaleigh has Rowanoak blood in her line.)
Andrew = Moonshadow = Bad + Evil. He is trying to have Kaleigh lead him to the ring. Sense he isn't in the Rowanoak blood line, he can't find it. But with Kaleigh's help, he can discover it and get its power.
Dylan = Good. Great great great grandson of the O'Briens. His great great great grandpa was a knight from the Rowanoak's kingdom. He protected the first cursed maiden of the Rowanoaks.
That clear things up a bit?
Andrew = Moonshadow = Bad + Evil. He is trying to have Kaleigh lead him to the ring. Sense he isn't in the Rowanoak blood line, he can't find it. But with Kaleigh's help, he can discover it and get its power.
Dylan = Good. Great great great grandson of the O'Briens. His great great great grandpa was a knight from the Rowanoak's kingdom. He protected the first cursed maiden of the Rowanoaks.
That clear things up a bit?
Wait. I thought in the proloque it just said that people who owned the ring were Moonshadows. Whoops. Also, I don't think that Andrew should be evil, but instead, his dad suggested for him to find the ring, but Andrew didn't know that his dad wanted it for bad reasons.
And we aren't doing it in order, Zaynah, we decide earlier that anyone can write whenever.
And we aren't doing it in order, Zaynah, we decide earlier that anyone can write whenever.

good kamiko...wicked...so andrew si good..but lets say eventually when she chooses dylan hell turn evil...
I honestly think we all messed up and it got confusing-er and confusing-er. So some serious editing is needed. I advice we restart at 37. Where this all kinda started. But before we do that, we need to figure out the plot. Ruby, you are the one who started this, so you're kinda the expert on who's who.
Okay, well, let's think about this. Kaleigh Rowanoak - got it. How does the ring come into her possession? Should she find it or does her mother give it to her? And then should her parents die before they can explain the curse? And we should figure out what the curse should be, like do you die at a specific age or something? And then, the Moonshadows. So, the Moonshadows have been trying to find the ring for centuries. Maybe Andrew is a Moonshadow and he is a bad guy, and he tries to trick Kaleigh..... BUT to make it even more exciting, he convinces Kaleigh he is a Rowanoak. Then at the end, POOF he's a bad guy and "aaaahhhhh noooo Andrew!!" and"Mwaahaahaahaa I have the ring now and guess what- I never liked you!" and so on.
Like that?
Like that?
frozen...how??????????????? what???????????????????
I liked Kamikos ideas, could we pleeeeeeeeease do it that Andrews dad is bad, and convinced Andrew to tell Kaleigh that she's a Moonshadow. Kaleigh thinks Andrew is evil, goes to Dylan, and then Dylan breaks her heart, and lime dies or something. I just want the love triangle to finish and Dylan to break her heart.