City of Ashes
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i hate this series
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May 11, 2018 04:22AM
I really wanted to ike this series, i even read up to the third book. I know so many people who love this series. I just couldn't get into it. Am I the only one?
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I also find the love story really awkward and it completely distracts from the main plot, even though that probably isn't the intention. She had a fantastic idea but she completely butchered it with the awkward relationships and the terrible writing.

I think I kind of ruined reading this series because I read the Infernal Devices first. Although there aren't any spoilers, the Infernal Devices were written after she was done with book four of TMIs, and so her writing style had evolved and developed - as with any author. However, when I went to read City of Bones, I felt that it had too many plots and themes floating all over the place and was more for drama than plot. I felt like the characters were just poorly developed and against added more drama than plot. I made it through City of Ashes, but was put in a very bad book slump and never picked up the third book. I know this might sound harsh, but the writing in those first two books was so immature and unprofessional - it felt like something you would expect on a FanFiction site rather than a published novel. I also feel like she dragged this series out for as long as she could - it was originally only supposed to be three books, then she added three more - and how many spin-off series and novellas now? I just feel like the author really cheapened the books all around and although I LOVE the Infernal Devices, I don't think I will ever pick up another TMIs book.

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Yeah, I agree. The writing was sloppy and unprofessional. I can't say anything about Infernal Devices as I've never read the books myself, and was very against it when I'd read TMI, but although her writing improved I don't think it improved enough to be called good writing. At least in my opinion it is mediocre at best. It felt choppy and awkward.

Same, i read the first two books, and i've been stuck with the third book since january i think, and i just cannot get through. And at this point i honestly don't even care anymore, even though i really wanted to like it, since so many people love this series. Kinda sad, but i tried

I read up to the third book, but they are so many things wrong with this series from the slow then rushed storyline to underdeveloped and cliché characters. I WANTED TO LOVE THIS SO MUCH AND I AM RELIEVED TO SEE THAT I AM NOT THE ONLY ONE.



Maybe the reason you don't like it is because you just don't like that style of writing, which is fine. I just want you to know that although the first couple of TMI books (or some might argue all) were bad, Cassandra Clare is a VERY good writer.
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