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[Jacqueline Spade]

acqueline Spade, a young Tampa lawyer, is eyeing for the Partnership at the prestigious law firm, Sheldon and Parker when she meets Alexander Whitman, a client.

Alex, is the mega rich ex-boyfriend and childhood friend of her boss's daughter. He is irresistibly attracted to Jacqueline. The two embark on a love affair of a lifetime, only to be parted cruelly when fate deals an ugly blow and Alex has to make a choice between friendship and love.

His choice leaves Jacqueline shattered, until she meets a stranger in a faraway land who has a remedy for her broken heart. (less)

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[Kay's]

I am currently writing my first romance novel and a regular reviewer on my Blog . I am Happy to help with feedback, message me if you are interested.