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The Reluctant Widow Group Read May 2018 Chapters 11-20
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I just popped in to say I have finished & the typos in this edition(Arrow)
made it such a frustrating read - nearly as bad as TOS.

Macclesfield, was it?


Haha! Yes, this is very true!
I think Heyer set herself a very difficult task with this situation and so she pulled it off quite well considering. The problem is that any modestly raised female would never do what Elinor did (view spoiler) so GH has to show somehow that she's not... ahem.... a fair cyprian. The best way to do this is to allow her to be bullied into it by Ned. But.... that raise the problem of Elinor being an essentially very passive character who is used by the hero - not very romantic. So GH fixes that by making her feisty and argumental.
I wonder if Elinor would have been more likeable if she'd been a bit more pragmatic about her situation and pleased at her good fortune, however immodestly gained! Or if she'd been more submissive and obedient and just let Ned tell her what to do without dispute.

Another reason I read those first scenes rather quickly- I’m tickled by the word play and cleverness, but in my mind I know a Regency lady would’ve been hard-pressed to accept a ride back to the inn, let alone a widow’s portion from a stranger! Great fun, but stretches plausibility, I agree, poor Elinor! I like her and feel for her. I also like Nicky and John, and of course Carlyon - he’s got a bit on his shoulders, bless him...

Haha! Yes, this is very true!
I think Heyer set herself a very difficult ..."
Very good points, Nick. I know I am overly hard on Elinor. I wish we would have been treated to a little inner dialogue with Elinor acknowledging her lucky escape from being a drudge, yet struggling with her awkward position.


I feel a little exasperated when Elinor (view spoiler)


So do I Susan & I know I am looking at her scruples with 21st century eyes. I love the sparring between Elinor & Carlyon. (view spoiler)

I agree completely!
@Carol It's pride, but I agree she has earned anything that's left in hard labour!

She does register feelings of being happy to allow Carlyon to take care of everything, but that cannot be easy for her, when she has had no one but herself to rely on for so many years. I think her Father might not have been up to the task of taking care of a family, and so instilled in her a inability to depend on others.
On the other hand, she has endured much, and while she has toughened and relied on herself, her pride has also caused her to avoid depending on anyone else. She is still mourning everything about her Father's death.

That's how I feel with RW. The inaccuracies and improbabilities aren't so extreme that I can't read the book so I just force myself to ignore them for the sake of good characters and witty dialogue.
Carlyon is overbearing but extremely thoughtful. I think he shows his true personality when Becky arrives and he gets her soup because she must be cold and she says that there was no way she could have been cold on the trip because he saw that she was all wrapped up. He reminds me of another GH hero but I can't remember who!
I think he'll be a considerate if bossy husband. The type of man who is always trying to look after you even if you don't need it.

How about Robert Beaumaris? He is thoughtful and considerate of Arabella's companion/servant. Arabella is not impressed, but her companion recognizes a true gentleman beneath the haughty cool exterior.


One of my favourite scenes is when John goes out to make sure Nicky doesn't hurt himself with the kite ...

I like him as well. He does get a story, though--all the Napoleonic spy stuff and goings on in the British government are really John's part of the story. It's clear that Carlyon respects his brother and one of the reasons for the convoluted machinations is to protect John's reputation.
I love the little glimpses we get of John and Ned's rapscallion days with the bird shot wounds and all. The scene where sober John can't resist going kite-flying with Nicky is one of my favorites.

That makes so much sense. Also the social embarrassment of his debts and suicide, not to mention being jilted by her fiance, has to have made Elinor acutely sensitive to any appearance of impropriety. She has a tough outer shell but inside she must be mortified at the possibility of that mid-night marriage ceremony being generally know. Accepting money from the estate of her appalling 'husband', or from Carlyon, might even have felt somehow like prostitution. The whole situation was potentially very compromising.

I love this scene and I really liked John.

Oh! oh! That would be so much fun :)

Please write it, Abigail!

Is this the stuff that Frederica uses on Felix? It sounds familiar.

The flip side of the kite scene is what we don't see. That's Carlyon and Elinor spending time working together going through all the papers and whatnot. Probably laughing and joking and spending time without any major stresses.
What I'm noticing on this read through is that she is under an incredible amount of stress this entire time. Housebreakers. Dangerous strangers. Letters from her relatives wondering about her strange marriage. Yeah. She's wound tight and is sarcastic ... with good reason!

The flip side of the kite scene is what we don't see. That's Carlyon and Elinor spending time working together going throu..."
That sums it up very well - it’s quite a situation, and she’s thrown in the deep end - I think a bit of snark is excusable!

Yes, that is the same Jelly in Frederica! In the US, we call Jelly Jello, but never mention that it is made from pig or cow skin, cartilage, and bones - that might be too gross to think about.
While they did eat some things that I would not like to try, I like the honest way that they referred to food (calves foot jelly, blood pudding, steak and kidney pie), instead of choosing cutesy names. You know what you're eating!

And I'm wondering if there's more to Carlyon not wanting to inherit Highnoons than simple dislike for his cousin?

I think there must be. It makes sense for Elinor to sell the estate and live on the the money, but since Carlyon owns the adjoining estate it seems odd to me that they would still plan to sell it after they marry. Surely enlarging the estate is a good thing? Besides not knowing who might buy it and become their neighbours!
If people are determined to think that Carlyon has been conniving to take his cousins inheritance, I don't think anyone will stop believing that's what he's done by marrying Elinor. Only now he's done it in an even more devious manner!

'Cept wasn't Bedlington the most vocal on that score? I should think he's going to be pretty quiet from here on out!

Oh my, yes, you're absolutely right!

I think there must be. It makes sense for Elinor to sell the estate..."
The original premise (Carlyon not wanting to inherit Eustace's property) is the book's weakness. GH does handle it persuasively by making the property so neglected & giving Elinor a lot of scruples, but I'm still not convinced.
I mean, those poor tenants deserved a decent landlord!

That is a good point, and one that I believe would sway Elinor and Carlyon.




Yes. I'm not committed in my mind to having it work out this way. And then John finds a lovely young woman with a bit of spunk to help him loosed up. Adventures then happen.



that is an excellent idea!
there really is no good reason Carlyon should go to such lengths to avoid inheriting Highnoons but I'm glad he did.
meanwhile, what do you think of the name Highnoons? I have always thought a name for a house instead of a street number was charming but I don't understand this one. now, Five Mile Ash seems perfectly descriptive.
did Carlyon's house have a name? I remember Nicky saying "up at The Hall"

Nasty Francis. I didn't like him when he appeared on the scene and then he announced he doesn't like dogs! He prefers cats?! What's wrong with him?
Nicky for sure has ADD! Nicky is supposed to be looking for an incriminating document... "Oh look! A kite! Oh look our cousin's childhood kite! I always wished I could fly it. Come on let's go fly it. Whee this is fun. What meadow? What document? Oh yeah..." BOYS! :rolls eyes:
That's all my reading for the night. I'll pick up again maybe tomorrow night after work or bedtime.
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