"Reigning Curse" YA fairtale retelling first 4 chapters(7039 words)

[Alice]

I have written the novel and have edited most of it. I am looking for someone to find typos, missing word, wrong words, and confusing sentences. I would also like general feedback before sending to agent/ publisher. And, is the title confusing? Any title suggestions....the original Fairytale is called Diamonds and Toads.


Thanks,

Alice

[Michelle]

I'd be interested if it's just the first few chapters. You can email me at michelledunbar568 AT gmail.com

[Kelsey]

I'll take a look too, if it is as you say the first few chapters. Ksimon AT kcai.edu

[Alice]

Thanks for your replies and editing help. If there are any unpublished authors who haven't tried a beta reader, I recommend it as it helps shed light on work you've looked at too much.