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message 1: by Maj, "Chewing-on-the-table"-kind of special (last edited Jul 26, 2014 06:25PM) (new)

Maj | 537 comments Mod
It's early June. I'm walking home with my best friend George Frederique Zacharias Kelly Xavier Benjamin Philip Collins. Yes, his parents thought that would be an amazing idea to give him so many names that he could make the entire alphabet with them. He actually hates them, so we just call him Bird.
We were talking about prom. "I'm serious. She looks horrible in a dress. She can't be in my court. Period!" I say.
"She'll look amazing. Stop being a spoiled brat."
"Ugh. Fine, whatever." I say, as we enter my house through the front door. "Mom! We're home!" I yell. At the same time I get my father's attention.
Hi dad I sign.
Hi, sweet heart. How was school? He replies.
OK. Got a B on chemistry.
Bird walks on to the kitchen to find something to eat. He always gets awkward around my dad. He doesn't sign. Not yet. My mom comes down and I kiss her cheek.
"Hi honey, is Bird here as well?" She got so used to Bird coming by after school, that she just sets another plate for him.
"Yes, he's in the kitchen. Raiding the fridge, no doubt."
My dad gets my attention back. Has he asked you to prom yet? I see the glee in his eyes.
No, stop bugging me. You know I'll tell you when he does. I look around. Mom says dinner is ready. I'll get Julia.
**
"Julia, have you picked your dress for prom yet?" Bird asks. I automatically start interpreting for my dad.
"No, not yet." Julia says, as she signs the exact same thing. "But I do have seen a few that I like." She turns to mom. Can you drive me to the mall tomorrow? I'm going shopping for prom with a couple friends. She signs.
Sure. Mom replies. Then she turns to my dad. Can you pass me the salad?
I look at Bird. "Have you asked your date yet?"
"Nope." He says smiling. "Why? Have you?"
"No, but I know that Milton wants to ask me."
Who's M-I-L-T-O-N? My dad asks.
Captain of the lacrosse team. And a total hotty.
What about D-A-V-I-D?
Dad, I told you. Don't pry I laugh.
"What was that?" Bird implies.
"Dad wanted to know about Milton." I shrug.

When dinner is over, and the dishes are done, I head to the hive. That's what we have started to call the computer room, because I own more and are better connected than the IT guys at MIT.
"I still can't believe that the cheer princess is a computer nerd." Bird says jokingly.
"And I still can't believe you keep making that joke every time you step in here."
I sit in my chair and boot up my main system. I'm not allowed to let it run while I'm not home any more, because I once hacked MI6 on a self generated automatic test run. That was really hard to explain to the authorities.
"Ready for some action?" I ask Bird.
"Where do you want to start?"


message 2: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
O.O That's really good Maj. MORE!!!


message 3: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(And is it alright if I put it in your folder?)


message 4: by Maj, "Chewing-on-the-table"-kind of special (new)

Maj | 537 comments Mod
Sure.


message 5: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ok thx


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

i like it..its good


message 7: by Maj, "Chewing-on-the-table"-kind of special (new)

Maj | 537 comments Mod
It's a bit short. I'm gonna write more when I got more inspiration.


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

check mine....just finsished


message 9: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments I like it!


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

I really like how it is so far. Write more! :)


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Awesome!


message 12: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 27, 2014 07:48AM) (new)

awwww thanks you guys...

maj...wicked!!!!!!!!!!!!!

soooo wats up yall


message 13: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Nothing much


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

EIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIID!!!!!!!! CANT WAIT


message 15: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments ME TOO!!!!!!!!!


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

Nothing. I need food. brb


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

tell me about it


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

I am back with some food. :-)


message 19: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments WHY????


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

why?????????????


message 21: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments I need food, but I'm not hungry!


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

im the oppsoite...i m hungry but i cant eat cause i fell sick


message 23: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Oh, that sucks


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

I wanted some breakfast. So I got some mini-wheats. Which is a type of food. Need I explain more?


message 25: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Sorry, and no, but I'm hungry now!


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

Sorry. Still fasting?


message 27: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Last day!


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

Yay!


message 29: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Eid is tomorrow!!!!I'm writing Chapter one!!!!! Yay!


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

wooohooooooooooo....!!!!!!!!!


message 31: by Maj, "Chewing-on-the-table"-kind of special (new)

Maj | 537 comments Mod
And here I was people were talking about my story :P But NOOO Eid tomorrow.....


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

why no


message 33: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Sorry, but hey what is there to talk about? Your story is great! PERIOD


message 34: by Maj, "Chewing-on-the-table"-kind of special (new)

Maj | 537 comments Mod
Thanks.. Still hurts though. That you misuse my story to talk about Eid :'( :P


message 35: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Sorry!


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

SORRY!


message 37: by Maj, "Chewing-on-the-table"-kind of special (new)

Maj | 537 comments Mod
Just kidding! But now you're all here... Chapter two is UPDATED


message 38: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments YES!


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

WOOOHOOO


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

Awesome!


message 41: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
LOVE IT!!!


message 42: by Kayla (new)

Kayla (kburson) | 18 comments Great start! I love the family dynamic and the father is a strong character. I think it's so funny that they sign about the love interest while he is there lol


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