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R.A. | 313 comments Words written since July 1: 2,036

Excerpt from Chapter Five (Lola is writing here):
As I was setting the platter on the table, I accidentally elbowed a man's face just as he started to take a drink of his punch. Well, it must have hurt because he yelled and dropped the glass – it landed on the floor, shattering to millions of pieces. I just stood there, staring as the liquid ran over the marble floor.

Total word count:
6,709


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R.A. | 313 comments Words written today:
1,068

Excerpt from Chapter Six (Lola is writing here):
Well, I've done it again. Disaster struck in the dining room this evening. I thought it a good idea to balance the tray of tarts in one hand while taking them to the table. Well, it was a good idea at the time. As I walked into the room, I ran smack into someone. I fell and watched the beautiful desserts toll on the floor. I would have cried if I hadn't hard a laugh above me.

Total word count:
7,785


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R.A. | 313 comments Words written today:
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Excerpt from Chapter Seven (Moses is writing here):
Well, I'm going to get a haircut! Joseph and I look a little bit shaggy at the moment. I wonder why … Joseph said it's because we turned into bears! What? Haha!

Total word count:
8,298


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R.A. | 313 comments Total words written yesterday and today:
560

Excerpt from Chapter Seven (Lola is writing here):
Oh journal, where cam I supposed to start? My heart is breaking – I'm hurting so bad! Hold on, I'm going to have to get a tissue.

Total word count:
8,862


Elizabeth Dragina | 1745 comments This is interesting Rose!! Keep it up!


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R.A. | 313 comments Hannah Schuck wrote: "This is interesting Rose!! Keep it up!"

Thanks!!!!! ;)


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R.A. | 313 comments Total words written yesterday and today:
720

Excerpt from Chapter Eight (Joseph is writing here):
Anyway, I should be careful what I say because after all, she'll be reading this later. She's already come over here to see what I just laughed about. Now she's reading everything and telling me I'm silly … again!

Total word count:
9,579


Elizabeth Dragina | 1745 comments Awesome! Do you know how many words you want in your story?


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R.A. | 313 comments Hannah Schuck wrote: "Awesome! Do you know how many words you want in your story?"

No I don't, but it's definitely going to be over 10,000!! :)) I just write until the story's done and see how many words it amounted to! :D


Elizabeth Dragina | 1745 comments Same for me!!


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R.A. | 313 comments Hannah Schuck wrote: "Same for me!!"

:D:D


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R.A. | 313 comments Words written today:
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Excerpt from Chapter Eight (Joseph is writing this):
I hope the clock wasn't watched because it was way over two minutes! But, I had to get another plate of that amazing food, along with coffee and a brownie which I have sitting in front of me. Anyway, I shouldn't keep talking about good. One would think all I do it eat! Maybe I do …

Total word count:
10,083


Elizabeth Dragina | 1745 comments 👏


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R.A. | 313 comments Words written today:
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Excerpt from Chapter Eight (Lola is writing here):
Well, I must go see if he's okay! He just might want something sweet to eat. I kind of feel like talking with him anyway. He boosts my mood every time!

Total word count:
10,545


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R.F. Gammon (rfgammon) | 417 comments R.A. wrote: "Words written today:
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Excerpt from Chapter Eight (Lola is writing here):
Well, I must go see if he's okay! He just might want something sweet to eat. I kind of feel like talking with him anyway..."


Awesome job!


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R.A. | 313 comments R.F. wrote: "R.A. wrote: "Words written today:
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Excerpt from Chapter Eight (Lola is writing here):
Well, I must go see if he's okay! He just might want something sweet to eat. I kind of feel like talking wi..."


Thanks!! ;)


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R.A. | 313 comments Word written today:
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Excerpt from Chapter Nine (Lola is writing here):
Well, I'm hungry. Maybe there's something in the pantry to snack on. I shouldn't say “maybe” – I know there is! With a hungry man in the house, one has to have goodies around all the time!

I really was hungry when I wrote that! :D

Total word count:
11,401


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R.A. | 313 comments Words written today:
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Excerpt from Chapter Ten (Lola is writing here):
I don't know how he's going to look with a beard, but if he looks “terrible” I'm going to have to tell him so.

Total word count:
12,403


Elizabeth Dragina | 1745 comments Haha.... a beard


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R.A. | 313 comments Hannah Schuck wrote: "Haha.... a beard"

*giggles* Yeah!


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R.A. | 313 comments Total words written on Saturday and today:
459

Excerpt from Chapter Ten:
Right, my stomach is protesting. I need to call for one of my girls' to bring me something to snack on. Maybe Lola has extra of that glorious-smelling cake she made yesterday!

Total word count:
12,860


Elizabeth Dragina | 1745 comments One of my girls.....? What does that mean?


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R.F. Gammon (rfgammon) | 417 comments R.A. wrote: "Total words written on Saturday and today:
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Excerpt from Chapter Ten:
Right, my stomach is protesting. I need to call for one of my girls' to bring me something to snack on. Maybe Lola has extr..."


Mmmm, cake *drools*


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R.A. | 313 comments Hannah Schuck wrote: "One of my girls.....? What does that mean?"

*smacks forehead* Oh, that's spoilers! :P Don't worry, he doesn't have two girlfriends or wives! :D


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R.A. | 313 comments R.F. wrote: "R.A. wrote: "Total words written on Saturday and today:
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Excerpt from Chapter Ten:
Right, my stomach is protesting. I need to call for one of my girls' to bring me something to snack on. Maybe ..."


Yeah I know! :P I think I was hungry when I wrote that!


Elizabeth Dragina | 1745 comments Okay..... I was worried he had two girlfriends or something.... XD


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R.A. | 313 comments Hahaha!!!! :P


Elizabeth Dragina | 1745 comments Ikr! That's why I asked..... XD


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R.A. | 313 comments IT'S FINISHED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D *screams and dances around*

Words written today:
2,620

Excerpt from Chapter Eleven (Lola is writing here):
So journal, farewell. It has been wonderful writing out my thoughts when I really need to! We've gone through so much!

Total word count:
15,661


Elizabeth Dragina | 1745 comments AHHHHH!!!! SO AMAZING!! I AM SO HAPPY FOR YOU ROSE!!! 😂😂😂😂 *throws confetti* I can't wait to read it!!! 😊


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R.A. | 313 comments *screams* :D:D I KNOW!! :D Just remember, I'm not publishing it, but you're welcome to read it anyway! ;)


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