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critique desired > a sneak peek of my dreams / visions of the future

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message 1: by Athirah (new)

Athirah | 3 comments Somewhere in the distant future,
I think I can see myself,
yes,
I can.

Somewhere in the white oblivion,
maybe I am someone else,
yes,
I am.

Somewhere a woman is writing
at a little desk
a cat on her lap,
a ring on her finger,
a heart in her chest.

Somehow she knows that she has grown
Not a dreaming child any longer,
not longing for the future,
because I am.

She has suffered for this,
she's now living her dreams.


message 2: by Sassy Sedusa (new)

Sassy Sedusa This is really beautiful.


message 3: by Athirah (new)

Athirah | 3 comments Unique wrote: "This is really beautiful."

thank you <3 I'm thinking of renaming it "visions of the future" but I'm unsure ..


message 4: by Sassy Sedusa (new)

Sassy Sedusa "Visions of the future" sounds great for the title.


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

this was masterfully executed and I agree "Visions of the future" is a great title


message 6: by Athirah (new)

Athirah | 3 comments Stacey wrote: "this was masterfully executed and I agree "Visions of the future" is a great title"

thank you so much! I added it to the original title :)


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

"Beauty is fame." - Carol Ann Duffy


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