Hey! I'm Juan Zapata, a senior at Alabama A&M University. I received a traditional 3-book deal from Owl Hollow Press in April, 2017, and my debut novel, Golden Skies, releases June 12th. Before I got to this stage, I had a lot to learn about writing. Indeed, I suffered a lot under the whips of my ruthless editors lol - knowledge that I can now offer in return.
Often times, many writers (especially me when I started out) commit easily-remediable and common mistakes such as telling instead of showing, ineffective sentence structures, passive voice, etc.
I want to help you shift your style away from any bad practices, so I'm offering to evaluate your first 1500 words in-depth for only $5. Turn around time wouldn't be more than a few days - probably the same night if I got nothing to do (which my senior year is a piece of cake, so that'll be the usual state of affairs).
Let me know! Send me a PM and we'll get the details sorted :)
P.S. If there's nothing wrong with your work, you don't pay a thing.
Often times, many writers (especially me when I started out) commit easily-remediable and common mistakes such as telling instead of showing, ineffective sentence structures, passive voice, etc.
I want to help you shift your style away from any bad practices, so I'm offering to evaluate your first 1500 words in-depth for only $5. Turn around time wouldn't be more than a few days - probably the same night if I got nothing to do (which my senior year is a piece of cake, so that'll be the usual state of affairs).
Let me know! Send me a PM and we'll get the details sorted :)
P.S. If there's nothing wrong with your work, you don't pay a thing.