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message 1: by Vincent, Mod & Author (new)

Vincent Lowry (vlowry) | 1098 comments Mod
When the Ice Returned

I would let the crisp morning
air fill my lungs in relief when
seeing the ice I thought I'd lost
sparkle in glory upon the battlefields
of my nightmare.

I would rise to the new sun
like a child on a birthday,
my thoughts racing far from the grasp
of the frozen shelf
breaking away from her mother
and bleeding into history.

I would skip under a rediscovered sky,
bluest of sea blues,
and toss my worries of an
uncertain tomorrow
into the river of posterity.

I would rake the footprints
shadowing the path of modernization,
content in the trailless path
behind every achievement,
every step of success and advancement.

I would undershoulder this cloaked weight,
piling for years,
bending my spirit like hunched back,
and run in the meadows
of a future abloom with promise.

Will you wake with me?


message 2: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinbienvenue) | 2161 comments Beautifully written poem Vincent, very nice.


message 3: by Vincent, Mod & Author (new)

Vincent Lowry (vlowry) | 1098 comments Mod
Thanks, Justin!

I'm glad you liked it.


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