Completed first draft graphic novel / vampire fantasy

[J.]

I have just completed the first draft of a graphic novel. The word count is just under 4000 words. I would describe it as a modern take on the Lancelot/Guinevere/Arthur saga with a vampire twist. I can offer a mobi or pdf file. epub may also be possible, but I'm not sure how well it will translate. I'm looking for input on the story arc, the illustrations, the writing, and the grammar and syntax.

[Kelsey]

This sounds cool. I'm interested. You can send me a PDF at Ksimon at kcai dot edu.

[Shreyonti]

I am very interested. I am an architecthre and design student and i think i will be able to provide you with useful feedback about the artwork.

Incidentally, I have written the first two chapters of YA illustrated novel and am looking for feedback regarding story, writing and artwork. Would you be willing to swap manuscriptsk?

If you are interested, please send me an email to shreyontis@gmail.com. I will accept PDF format only.

Looking forward to your reply.

[J.]

Sure, we can do a swap. I'll send the file to you now.