Beta Reader Needed for 84k word - YA Fantasy

[J.D.]

I'm looking for a beta reader for my 84k YA Fantasy novel. I would appreciate any constructive feedback/edits you feel would make this a stronger work. I've manually edited it with Grammarly and Wordrake.

THE SCIONS OF FAERIE, a completed 84,000 word YA Fantasy, combines Greek, Roman, Norse, and Celtic mythologies.

In a world filled with racial strife, Ian Prescott risks his soul to stop a civil war and defeat the mage who killed his parents. Ian discovers the mage, Turok, seeks to destroy all Scions of Faerie after their ancestor sent him to Uffern for a millennium using the flaming sword, Brander. After surviving Turok’s first two assignation attempts, Ian and his cousin, Drew, use a magical amulet to activate a Faerie portal within Stonehenge.

While seeking Ian's aunt within the Cairn of the Dead, Ian and Drew battle against Lord Turok’s minions before entering the hidden city of Baile Mòr. When a friend becomes a foe, Ian must choose between killing his friend and saving his aunt's life.

As he traverses the cairn's mazes and trapped rooms, Ian learns that Brander is sentient. As the sword exerts increasing control over him, Ian must decide if sending Turok back to Uffern is worth risking his own soul’s existence.

THE SCIONS OF FAERIE is book 1 of The Faerie Chronicles. Books 2 and 3, THE SOUL STONES OF FAERIE and THE HALF-BLOOD OF FAERIE are complete and I am working on book 4, THE PRIESTESS OF FAERIE, with a planned prequel, THE DRUID OF FAERIE.

[Alonzo]

I would be willing to beta read your Fantasy novel, The Scions of Faerie, if you're still in need.

Alonzo

[J.D.]

Alonzo wrote: "I would be willing to beta read your Fantasy novel, The Scions of Faerie, if you're still in need.

Alonzo"

Thanks Alonzo. Please send me a PM with the e-mail address you'd like me to send it.

[J.D.]

Thanks Stephanie. I'll send it over later tonight.