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message 1151: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby (I'm just gonna ignore you two trouble makers)

"Z, shut up!" I whisper between gritted teeth as Dean glances over to us. Then I push ahead of her, and, grinning widely, say to him, "Oh, thanks - we'll be going now!"

I took Mae and Zaynah's elbows, and dragged them away.


message 1152: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby "Flirting....honestly, I think someone's getting jealous!" I aim back at her.


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Ruby ( O.O I'm eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeevil! XDXD)

Then I finally realize what I've done. My eyes filled with tears, and I looked frantically from Mae to Zaynah. "Omigosh Zaynah! I'm so sorry! Mae, please, help me! Mae, honest I didn't mean-"

Mae looked shocked, she was just standing there, frozen staring at us. But it didn't take long for her to find her voice. "OMIGOSH RUBY WHAT DID YOU DO???? RUBY??? THAT'S HER WOUND!!! YOU'RE GONNA KILL HER!!!!"

I fell to my knees as Mae staggered off in the direction of Chiron's cabin, Zaynah's arm wrapped around her shoulder, being half dragged.

"Mae...Zaynah...please I didn't mean..." I whispered. I hadn't meant to hit her there. I don't know what came over me. I hadn't even liked him. Zaynah just got so- Ohhhhhhh what did I do?


message 1154: by Ruby (last edited Oct 19, 2014 06:02AM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby I let out a small scream. "Oh Zaynah, it isn't your fault! Please, wake up, we gotta get you-"

"What's this?" A voice suddenly appeared from the gloom, and a huge figure emerged from the shadows.

"Chiron!" Mae gasped. "Chiron, we need your help, Zaynah she-"


message 1155: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby Finally, after a long time of constant worrying and crying, Zaynah's eyes fluttered open.

"Zaynah!" Mae screamed, and it took all my strength to keep her from flinging herself onto Zaynah, and reopening the wound.

"Hi Z." I said, giving a half reassuring grin. "How ya feelin'?"

She groaned and tried sitting up, but fell back against the pillows.

"H-how long have I been out?" she whispered hoarsely.

"About two days." I replied, handing her a glass of water. "I bet you're starving. In a few days or so you'll be as good as-"

"NO!" suddenly she screamed.

Both Mae and I jumped back in surprise. "What?" I asked timidly.

"No! We- we don't have that much time! Must...go..."

Zaynah was getting frantic, trying to get out of her bed, throwing back the covers and attempting pathetically to run.


message 1156: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby "Who, Zaynah? What is it? Did you dream something?" I asked softly.


message 1157: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby I looked wide-eyed at her. "B-but we only have two days!"


message 1158: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby (DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN)


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Ruby (AYE!)

A huge silence fell over the crowd. No one seemed to know what to say. Zaynah was wobbling slightly on her standing position, so I hurried up and took her place, gently pushing her aside.

"Alright people, you heard the girl!" I began, my brain whirring with things to say. I was clad in camouflage, with black boots and hair pulled back in a makeshift bun. At my side was a sword and a small, black bag.

"She...she's right! All our gods and goddesses up on Olympus need our help! If the clones are finished and let loose on the world...Well it won't be pretty! It's up to us, the half-bloods. My friends and I-" I nodded back behind me at Mae and Zaynah standing straight and mouths set. "We have seen it. We went on a different mission, and came back with horrible news. We set out so long ago, by our selves. But now...now we need more help. My friend Zaynah, she's been injured countless times... Mae has contributed to our team so much...without either of them I wouldn't be standing here today. I guess what I'm trying to say is - Alone isn't enough! We can't do it alone, we need your help! Now, as Zaynah said before me, who will stand and FIGHT?"

Finally a huge cheer errupted from the crowd, and, grinning, I took a hand from either girl beside me, and held it up in the air in triumph.


message 1160: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby (bleh, gotta go - bye!!)


message 1161: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby (erm, I'd rather not be swearing, if that's okay...)


"Who was she?" Mae adds.


message 1162: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby "Well, we gotta get going, shouldn't we?" I said, clapping my hands together.


message 1163: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby I grinned, and we set off to where everyone was excitedly gathering, chattering and yapping away.


message 1164: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby "How about..." say out a small voice, but the rest of it was lost amist the chatter.

"Hey, be quiet will yeh?" I shouted, and gradually, it stopped. "One at a time!" I added.


message 1165: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby "W-well, what about plant-travel?" she went on timidly, looking around as if everyone was gonna kill her. "T-the Demeter cabin could do it, I'm sure!"

"Plant-travel?" I asked, puzzled.


Johnathan Nakaahiki "It's like shadow traveling except you travel by plants.", she replied.
"Ohhh. I get it." I said


message 1167: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby I exchanged looks with Mae, who looked exactly as I felt. Absolutely baffled.


message 1168: by [deleted user] (new)

((other people are commenting XD))


message 1169: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby "What???" I asked, still utterly baffled. But no one was paying me any mind.


message 1170: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby ((no, I think she said sure you can join...I think...))


message 1171: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby ((Uh, whatever ya want :D ))


message 1172: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby "Oh, yes - you, yeah, you uh, no, sorry, I meant-" but Zaynah cut in helpfully and shouted, "OI!! WE'RE TALKING TO DA GIRL WITH THE GREEN SHIRT AND RIPPED JEANS AND BLACK HAIR! Sheesh!"

I reddened, but nodded towards the girl.


message 1173: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby My eyes widened to the size of apples, but beside me Zaynah didn't look at all surprised.

"Well, sounds like we have a tie," called Mae, stepping forward. "Who votes what?"

"Wolves for me, I suppose," shrugged Zaynah.

"But then again, there are only five of them, and about two hundred of us," countered Mae.

"True, true," Zaynah said, and turned back to the girl - Alice. "What do you say to that, girlie?"


message 1174: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby "Ah." I looked back at Mae and Zaynah, and Mae shrugged. "Wolves it is, then, I guess."


message 1175: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby "Hey! I thought WE were getting the wolves!" I protested, stepping forward.

"Well, I called FIVE." she said matter of factly, postitioning herself on it's back.


message 1176: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby "Woah now!" I said nervously, holding my hands up.


message 1177: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby My eyes grew huge, and I just barely hopped on a wolf before it rose out of reach. Two hundred more campers got onto various woodland animals, and followed on the ground.


message 1178: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby (Erm, I had, in my post, originally had them following on the ground....but we can continue with your thingie, I guess...)

"This is odd, isn't it?" I said conversationally to Mae, beside me. She looked sick.


message 1179: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby I turned, and looked her over. She was definitely not someone to be meddled with, that was sure...

"It's a quest." I said simply.


message 1180: by [deleted user] (new)

"Its just were the gods are being cloned by Hecate who has gone weirdo, and all their children are endanger of the pain it causes during the cloning process! No biggie!" I smile the best I could when I feel like my insides were sloshing out of place.


message 1181: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby (who are you talking to, Alice?)


message 1182: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby (Ummmmmmmm okaaaaay)

"Yeah, pretty sure," I said, then narrowed my eyes.

"Why are you asking?"


Johnathan Nakaahiki "No reasons", I said with a nervous laugh...


message 1184: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 27, 2014 03:05PM) (new)

Alice wrote: "(-_-No please she is my character.I'm going to ignore your post and use Ruby's.)

I smiled."Just making sure I'm getting my facts right!"I smiled again and easily sat cross-legged on the animal."


((I think Johnathan was referring to his character.))


message 1185: by [deleted user] (new)

Zaynah {♥Edward Cullen♥...♥Tobias Eaton♥...♥Harry Potterr♥...♥Magnus Bane♥} wrote: "where did jonathan and alice come from..i am so confused...i remember alice being a minor temperory character but whose jonathan...or is her like an occasional dose of guest surprise""

I really don't know, I just said that cuz I didn't want his to feel badly. I guess in the end it is your, Mae's, Maj's, and Ruby's discussion, you can decide.


message 1186: by [deleted user] (new)

Sorry, Alice. :)


Johnathan Nakaahiki But you accidentally shot a Johnathan bird!!!


message 1189: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby "Hmmm nice shooting!" I exclaimed.


message 1190: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby I looked around. Sure enough, it was beginning to darken, and I glaced over at Mae, who was dozing off.


message 1191: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby I shrugged. Then, upon thinking about it for a while, say, "Well, I don't know. I do miss it when I was 'normal' and didn't have to worry about monsters and stuff. I really don't know."

"Well, I for one," began Mae, yawning loudly, "know that I miss the 'old days'. I just would want to curl up with a good book once in a while without fear for a monster...." A loud snore sounded through the camp. Mae had fallen asleep.


message 1192: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby I shrugged, and burrowed further into my sleeping bag. Upon turning over, I fell fast asleep.


message 1193: by [deleted user] (new)

The night was peaceful, even when I was dreaming. Nothing weird accrued, and then dawn peaked over the hills. I popped awake at the morning light straight away, and silently got out of my dirt bed. Sneaking away from my sleeping friends, I wandered off towards the near by woods. I needed to meet some new critters and have a wild life conversation for the first time in weeks.
I met a lovely mama brown bear, and a raccoon family. A heard of deer hung out with me for a while, and I chatted about the latest nature gossip with them. The creatures here seemed nice enough, but I longed for my family. Each of these packs of animals were with their loved ones, and had each other. Of course I loved my friends and all, but I still wanted my sisters and parents here with me.
After departing with the deer herd, I heard someone approaching from the woods. Someone from camp had woke up.


message 1194: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby I turned over, then sat up with a groan.

"Oooo my back...feels like I slept on the ground all night-"

Then I remembered where I was and what the situation was like.

"Ah yes."


I looked around, and saw that two of the sleeping bags were already empty, so I set off in search for their inhabitants.


message 1195: by [deleted user] (new)

"Ye is fine. How is thy Alice?" I reply. Well this was a little weird of a time to go all Shakespeare, but I went with it.


message 1196: by [deleted user] (new)

"Fine. You?"


message 1197: by [deleted user] (new)

"Did I wake you? I didn't mean to wake you up."


message 1198: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby "Hey, there you guys are!" I exclaimed as I appeared from the undergrowth. "I was wondering where you disappeared to!"


Aneesha ANYONE KNOW ALEX FROM ARIZONA


Aneesha OR SUPERMONK23


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