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Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131213 comments Mod
Large. Has six bedrooms. A big backyard and a big front yard with a long driveway.


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Meg shrugged, "I don't really have one."


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"What? But you have to have a favourite colour. You want to know what mine is?" He asked


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She pulled into the driveway, "sure," she looked at him.


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"The beautiful coral colour of the sunset with the smallest hint of silver lining the bottom" he said poetically, his eyes sparkling as he looked into hers.


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Her heart melted at the sound of his voice as he talked about something as simple as a colour. Her cheeks pinked as she looked at the sparkle in his eyes, "that sounds pretty," she agreed.


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"Yeah, it's beautiful " he gave her a gorgeous smile.
He stepped out of the car and went to the other side and opened the door,
He put her hand in his and kissed it softly.
"Shall we go in?" He said politely.


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Her heart did flipped and she nodded. She reached in the to-small back and grabbed her button covered hippy-like warn out grey-green back pack. She slumped it over her shoulder, welcome to Grovels Manor," she gestured to the over large house.


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"You lead the way" he gestured forward with a smile.
He was aching bad he really wanted to kiss her and he didn't know why, you shouldn't have feelings like this for someone you met yesterday?


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Mag nodded and led the way to the house. She walked in and took her shoes off. She slipped on her fuzzy slippers and looked back at him, "take off your shoes. Mom will kill me if theirs dirt anywhere," even though it was the maid that did all the cleaning.


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He slipped of his shoes so he was in socks.
"Nice slippers" he chuckled "they're cute, on you especially" he grinned.
"Yes! I finally get to read some of your writing" he smiled.


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She blushed, "y-ya..." She went to the kitchen, "I'm going to get something to drink first, want anything?"


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"Water is fine" he said quietly, he smiled she was blushing again.


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She nodded and got him a glass of water. She got herself a glass of milk and sipped it.


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"Thanks" he said and gulped it down thirsty.
"So what are your books about?" He asked curiously.


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She blushed and looked down, "stuff," she didn't like talking about her stories, they were part of her. She rinsed her cup and put it in the dishwasher along with his. She took a deep breath, "I guess were heading up to my room..." That made her nervous. She led him up the spiral stairs and to her light purple room. She went to her desk and unlocked the top drawer.
One of her walls was just a line of book shelves, covered in books.
She took out the three stories she'd written and stated at them. Her dad had payed a publisher big money to publish them, but she didn't think they were good enough for that.


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He followed her up the spiral staircase, he heard the hint of nervousness in her voice when she said they would be going up to her room, that made him smirk. He saw a huge wall just covered in books.
"Wow, it's beautiful" he said smiling and then noticed that she had pulled out her stories, he looked at her excitedly.


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Mag hugged her books, "thanks," she looked down at the books in her arms, "I.. Umm... These are the only hard copies... There actually available in stores," which made her feel sick, "a-so don't ruin my copies..." She carefully held them out, as if they'd break.


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He carefully held them in his hands.
"The covers are gorgeously made" he said awestruck by the material they had used to make them. He ran his fingers along the side and opened it up.
"You know I might just have to buy my own copies" he said.
"Do you have a pen?" He asked.


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She blushed at the thought of him buying her books. She grabbed a pan and handed it to him, "your not going to mark up the books... Right?"


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"No of course not!" He laughed, he started writing the book titles on his hand.
"There now I can buy my own copies" he grinned "but also before I do I want you to write your phone number down" he chuckled holding the pen out with his arm laid down.


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Mag bit her lip and took the pan, she'd never given anyone her number before. She stepped close to him and wrote her number in a delicate and wavy way. She finished and put the cap in the pen. She looked up at him and her heart stopped at how close she was to him.


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She had written her name in a beautiful cursive wavy hand writing, he looked up and her face was inches from his only a small gap between them and there mouths he thought. He looked down at her lips and then looked back up into her eyes he was staring deep into her eyes daring her to break the gap between them.


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"I-I.. Umm..." Her heart was beating so load that she could her it in her ears. She looked into his eyes and say the daringness. She couldn't move though; his sent had her frozen.


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"You?" He said daringly and closed another inch between them leaving them about 2 inches apart. She looked almost frozen and unable to move, he closed another inch between them by now their noses were touching and her lips were almost touching his.


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She bit her lip, her heart was inflating in her chest, a million thoughts running threw her mind
. Was he going to kiss her? "I-I never kissed a boy," she admitted in a sweet whisper. A tone she didn't even know she could do.


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"Well I guess you have now" he said and before he could think of what would happen after he closed the last of the space between them and kissed her passionately.


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She made a small squeak sound when his lips collided with hers. His lips were warm, smooth, and complemented her soft, fragile ones. She hesitated before kissing him back with the same amount of intense passion. She arms folded around the back of his neck and she head her books hit the floor, but she didn't care right now.


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He wrapped his arms around her waist, her lips fit perfect with his in all the right places they were fragile but soft. He heard the books hit the floor but his brain couldn't even process that right now. The kiss just felt so right he deepened it a little love his body closer to hers as well.


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A small moaned echoed in her throat and she deepened the kiss, moving her lips against his and brushing his tongue with hers. The feeling shot tingles down her body. She ran her fingers threw his hair.


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He rubbed his arm up the small of her back pressing his body against hers it sent shivers up his spine, he heard her moan and it sent more shivers up his spine. It just felt right to kiss her.


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The front door shut downstairs, causing Mag to jump and pull out of the kiss, but not out of his arms. She looked at his lips and bit her lip, waiting.
"Magen!" An old woman called.
Mag sighed with relief, "I'm studying," she called, lying.
"Alright."
Mag looked his face over, "the maid," she explained, "she never comes in when I'm studying." Her heart melted. She wanted more of him.


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"That's good because I wasn't ready to go yet" he said biting his lip and winked at her. He pulled her back close again.


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She smiled and leaned against him. She kissed him again, picking up where they had left off.


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He passionately kissed her deeper, still rubbing the small of her back.


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She purred against his touch and wanted more, everything.


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He moaned softly surprised that he had made the sound, but he didn't care he just kept kissing her. Each kiss more deep and passionate than the last.


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She trembled and jumped up, wrapping her kegs around his waist.


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(Sorry I was away for a couple of days)

He hugged her tight his hands moving along the small of her back. He moved his mouth to the side and kissed along her cheek bone and then done her neck.


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Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131213 comments Mod
((It's ok))

Mag shivered, the it felt so good, so sweet. She was both scared and exited to see where this went. "H-how old are you?" She asked, hoping he was older then her mother would above of.


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He grinned devilishly "nineteen, how old are you?" He asked.


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"S-seventeen," she whispered, "I'll be eighteen next week," her mom would flip. He wasn't in her grade. Her heart pounded and age ran from her mind, "w-what are we going to do," she asked in a whisper.


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"I don't know, that's up to you" he said with a smirk, he could feel her heart pounding against his it was giving him tingles all through his chest. He didn't care for the age difference kissing her just felt right.


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She blushed and ran her fingers threw his hair, feeling the softness, "can we just do this for a wile?" She was scared of going further.


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"Sure" he smiled a genuine smile, he understood and respected the fact that she didn't want to go further. After all they only met a couple of days ago.
He ran his finger along her cheek bone tracing it.


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Her heart bounced around her chest cavity from his touch, but plummeted into her stomach when she heard her mom come home.
"Magian! Dinner!"
Mag shifted and nibbled her lip.


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His eyes went wide, "umm so do you want me to leave?" He said hurriedly.
"I go can go out the window, it's not that far a walk" he said not really wanting to leave, he wanted to stay with her the whole night, talk and kiss but he couldn't.


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((Gtg))


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()I'll be back in about an hour))


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Mag bit her lip, "I umm.." She looked down, "I don't want you to go..."

((Kk))


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