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Freelance editing, you would be completely on your own, which might be a good thing or bad thing.
Personally, I have no desire whatsoever to deal with a developmental editor unless it's someone working for the publisher that will publish my book. And even then. For fiction, there isn't much use. If I can't develop my own ideas, I can't write it.

Paid editors for independent authors are generally of the proof reading variety.
Editor positions with established publishers (large or small) usually require a degree, although some offer internships for students. I don't know how well paid those positions are, or if they are available part-time.

They can do more than that. I've read some indie books that had obviously only been proofread and not fully edited. Proofreading is error-finding. Typos, etc. An editor--one who is not doing plot development but line editing--will still notice and make changes for repetitive sentence constructions, repeated words, misused words, awkward clunkers, things like that. My editor will contact me if she notices lack of clarity in the blocking for a scene. She asks me to make my own changes for things like that. She says my ms are some of the cleanest she's edited, but I'd still never publish without her. I'd feel like I'd gone to a party in my pajamas. An editor does much more than the average beta reader could. Beta readers aren't being paid to scrutinize every line, and can get so wrapped up in the plot that they don't see the problems that need fixing. A good, qualified, reasonably priced editor (not proofreader or developmental editor) could be valuable to many indies.

It has some interesting information for this market, especially in terms of pricing and the marketing that worked for her (which may not work for you, but there you go).
Her particular experience was as a graphic designer, I believe, and then people just naturally asked her about editing. For me, I'm a translator and then people just naturally asked me about editing.
So generally you build from contacts in one area and apply it to the other, but of course everyone's path is different.


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Thanks. I wasn't trying to describe myself as an editor, though, but someone who appreciates her editor.





I looked at a few options. Most charge three grand per book (mine doesn't thankfully). And you have to pay for a proofreader on top of that.
I suppose the real challenge with developmental editing is it's hard maybe to judge the criteria for success. Proofreading is (not quite but almost) binary - it is right or not. Plot structure etc. is maybe a little more tricky. Nothing is ever perfect after all.
Plus the editor has less control. The client might ignore advice or even change the book after the editor has finished with it. Like I read a book last year - it was well edited except for two pages in the middle which were absolute clunk. My immediate reaction was how did the editor miss it, but it probably wasn't the editor's doing. The author probably made some change post-editing to fix a plot hole or something.

I found her by googling "freelance fantasy editor." Hers was the first name that came up, from a post she made on a fantasy forum. I contacted her and asked for references, which she provided. That, along with the fact that she read the first three chapters for $30 before I committed to paying for her to edit the whole thing, helped me make the decision. I'd say if you're just starting out, offer to do the first chapter for free, so the authors can get an idea of what you have to offer. Also, make sure they sign a contract so you don't end up accidentally doing the whole thing for free, and so they understand that your editing isn't guaranteed to help them sell their book.
Line editing is a separate level of editing, not usually covered by a developmental editor, though a good one will point out bad habits. Line editing should cover the flow of the language, how does everything sound on a paragraph level. Copy editing is more for grammar, typos, etc then proofreading is the final look at formatting and all. At least, that's how a book editor once explained the differences to me.
And yes, there's nothing an editor can do about an author not taking their suggestions!

That's not the same as ignoring your proofreaders suggestions, though. Sometimes the author is perfectly right to say 'I recognise your opinion but I'll keep it like it is.' At the end of the day it's their book and they go forward more informed, whatever they decide to do.


That's not the same as ignoring your proofreaders suggestions, though. Sometimes the author i..."
Very true, and I admit I didn't take action on all of my editors suggestions, just like when I get feedback from my writing group i don't always take action. It's the author's story.
One more thing I'll add is that the most helpful thing my editor did was not just to point out the issues, which is something I get plenty of from my writing pals, but to offer concrete solutions to the problems. For example, I had a character that none of my early readers liked, and instead of just saying "I didn't like this character," she told me what wasn't working for her about the character and told me a few things i could try to fix it.
Working in a shop is fine, but it wouldn't help me with my studies at the same time.