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message 351: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) Continue, Alicia! I luv your writing... =)


message 352: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Ahh, I love it too!


message 353: by [deleted user] (new)

thx guys :] i added a second chapter but im not done with it :]


message 354: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) Yeah, I read it. It was good!


message 355: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments Yes! I finished chapter six for Fallen. Please read and leave a comment :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 356: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
The rose was a fine bright red like the vivid color of blood while the other that lied next to it was a vivid color of white reminding Eris of a dove she had one seen.
“Chose carefully.” He spoke lightly from behind her, a hint of mocking smile playing in his voice.

If I started a story out like this would anyone want to read it?


message 357: by [deleted user] (new)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...

none of mine are finished.


message 358: by [deleted user] (new)

I'amber wrote: "The rose was a fine bright red like the vivid color of blood while the other that lied next to it was a vivid color of white reminding Eris of a dove she had one seen.
“Chose carefully.” He spoke..."


i definitely would :]


message 359: by [deleted user] (new)

I've added a new poem and a few other things. My link is on the first page. Please read and give me feedback!


message 360: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments I finally finished chapter seven for Fallen, please, please, please read and leave a comment for me... The last chapter of Fallen wasn't very interesting but things pick up again in this one :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


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message 362: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments Hehe... Wrote like 1000 words in half an hour! Anyways, I just finished chapter 14 for Fallen and because you have nothing better to do, read it >:(

Just kiding.

here it is :]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 363: by [deleted user] (new)

Hehe. Your right. I have nothing better to do. I'm on Fall Break.


message 364: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments Katherine the Cat Lover wrote: "Hehe. Your right. I have nothing better to do. I'm on Fall Break."

Lol, really? I just put that down because I was bored and wanted to see what people would say XD


message 365: by [deleted user] (new)

Haha. :)


message 366: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments :P


message 367: by [deleted user] (new)

I love being witty.


message 368: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments I do too... Half the time I can bee really sarcastic...


message 369: by [deleted user] (new)

Heh. I don't believe in sarcasm.


message 370: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments Lol, really? I don't think I've ever heard a person say that before.


message 371: by [deleted user] (new)

Well, now you have. :P


message 372: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments XD That is true. Now I have.


message 373: by [deleted user] (new)

Like I said. I like being witty.


message 374: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) I like being sarcastic and facetious.


message 375: by [deleted user] (new)

Facetoius?


message 376: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) facetious - witty


message 377: by Krys (last edited Oct 26, 2009 04:50PM) (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments And thus I have finally writen chapter 15 for Fallen. Read it! All of you! Nah, just kidding... sorta :]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 378: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) I will! As soon as I have time! I don't have time for anything anymore! ACK!!!!


message 379: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments I am magical-- written two chapters for Fallen under twenty four hours, even with eight hours of school today :P Please, please, read and leave a comment. I've finally gotten to a part where I really actually get to introduce my villian :P

Here's chapter 16:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 380: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Wow, I havn't been on in a long while D;


message 381: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: "Wow, I havn't been on in a long while D;"

No you haven't :P I haven't seen you in like, forever.


message 382: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Ah I know D: I havn't been really on goodreads since skool, I've been on facebook and myspace but not really goodreads, I miss everyone D;


message 383: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments Mhmm... And now I must be going to bed. Night!


message 384: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Ah, goodnight (:


message 385: by Krys (last edited Oct 30, 2009 10:25PM) (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments You too :)


message 386: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


Yay! I think I FINNALLY got this figured out XD !


message 387: by Perla (new)

Perla YAY SERIOSULY i've been waiting for it


message 388: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Aha, which is good ^^

I'mma work on it more today (;


message 389: by Perla (new)

Perla YAY!!
You're a really good writer.


message 390: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Lol, thanks (:.

Eh, I'm not so sure about how it's starting off tho?


message 391: by Perla (new)

Perla I like it. It draws the reader in


message 392: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Thanks (:.


message 393: by [deleted user] (new)

I've updated my fantasy that I have yet to title: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

I'm kind of stuck on the sixth chapter of "One Last Look" (newly named): http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Please read both of them, and give feedback. I'd really appreciate it!


message 394: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
I red the firdt one, I love it ^^


message 395: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks!


message 396: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments YES!!!! I've reached 13,384 for my NaNo, The Seventh Dimension, and finished chapter four. Now all of you must read it... ALL OF YOU! :P

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4808...


message 397: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Anna, your welcome :D

Go Kriss!


message 398: by [deleted user] (new)

Kriss wrote: "YES!!!! I've reached 13,384 for my NaNo, The Seventh Dimension, and finished chapter four. Now all of you must read it... ALL OF YOU! :P

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4808... "


Dude!!! You're already on 13,384? I'm not even doing NaNo, but I'm still impressed. Jeez.


message 399: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments XD Lol... Some people have written more than that...


message 400: by [deleted user] (new)

Still... it's November 3rd! Bah.


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