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Sep 20, 2009 08:24PM

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thx guys :] i added a second chapter but im not done with it :]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
The rose was a fine bright red like the vivid color of blood while the other that lied next to it was a vivid color of white reminding Eris of a dove she had one seen.
“Chose carefully.” He spoke lightly from behind her, a hint of mocking smile playing in his voice.
If I started a story out like this would anyone want to read it?
“Chose carefully.” He spoke lightly from behind her, a hint of mocking smile playing in his voice.
If I started a story out like this would anyone want to read it?
I'amber wrote: "The rose was a fine bright red like the vivid color of blood while the other that lied next to it was a vivid color of white reminding Eris of a dove she had one seen.
“Chose carefully.” He spoke..."
i definitely would :]
“Chose carefully.” He spoke..."
i definitely would :]
I've added a new poem and a few other things. My link is on the first page. Please read and give me feedback!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Just kiding.
here it is :]
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
Hehe. Your right. I have nothing better to do. I'm on Fall Break.

Lol, really? I just put that down because I was bored and wanted to see what people would say XD
Heh. I don't believe in sarcasm.
Like I said. I like being witty.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Here's chapter 16:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

No you haven't :P I haven't seen you in like, forever.
Ah I know D: I havn't been really on goodreads since skool, I've been on facebook and myspace but not really goodreads, I miss everyone D;
I've updated my fantasy that I have yet to title: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
I'm kind of stuck on the sixth chapter of "One Last Look" (newly named): http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
Please read both of them, and give feedback. I'd really appreciate it!
I'm kind of stuck on the sixth chapter of "One Last Look" (newly named): http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
Please read both of them, and give feedback. I'd really appreciate it!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4808...
Kriss wrote: "YES!!!! I've reached 13,384 for my NaNo, The Seventh Dimension, and finished chapter four. Now all of you must read it... ALL OF YOU! :P
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4808... "
Dude!!! You're already on 13,384? I'm not even doing NaNo, but I'm still impressed. Jeez.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4808... "
Dude!!! You're already on 13,384? I'm not even doing NaNo, but I'm still impressed. Jeez.
Still... it's November 3rd! Bah.