The insight? discussion
Let's read YOUR writing!
hey guys, please read the novel i'm working on..i'd love to hear from you. your ideas would be greatly appreciated. thanks. :D http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
o actually i have a new chapter now heres the list:
www.goodreads.com/story/list/2408962
plz check it out and comment the chapters arent long but there are kind of a lot of them!! thx guys!!
www.goodreads.com/story/list/2408962
plz check it out and comment the chapters arent long but there are kind of a lot of them!! thx guys!!
Kriss wrote: ":D I finally finished the book cover for TSD:http://s726.photobucket.com/albums/ww..."
Wow, it's good!
Milli wrote: "Kriss wrote: ":D I finally finished the book cover for TSD:http://s726.photobucket.com/albums/ww..."
Wow, it's good!"
Thankies :)
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I'amber wrote: "I hate it when you have to wait a year for a book to come out >:|"I know what you mean... I have to wait a year for The Clockwork Angel to come out by Cassandra Clare.
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I'm sorry :[ Can you read something for me real fast... Its just a para I want to use for TSD :]Dae scanned the Produce Section, searching for a simple fruit. Turning on her heel to walk down the aisle, though not without nearly running into a strong-muscled chest—flailing backwards in an attempt to change her path a slender hand reached out to touch her shoulder, stabling her balance as she nearly tripped.
The next thing she noticed –other than the strange warmth of the touch—was a glint of ruby in the corner of her eye, glancing upward she saw the boy’s other hand twirling an apple by it stem, bound to snap at any moment, but her gaze was held there for only a moment, eyes already directed without orders towards his face.
It was so elegantly carved, angelic, but she couldn’t stare at any of his features long, not with emerald eyes staring towards Dae’s own orbs. They where the most beautiful color she had ever seen. They were a shades of emerald, just like gems but endless, an abyss of jade as deep as the clouded nights, fathomless. It was as if to stare into those stunning optics one would find themselves lost, bodiless and floating eternally in a void of nothing. To say they where uncompassionate would have been a lie, for they were anything but, they where flames, died green and blazing with cold fire.
She heard the apple snap. She reached to catch it, but even as she felt it hit her hand the feeling that shot through her fingertips was disconnected, as if it didn’t belong to her. The green-eyed boy grinned, a sort of wicked, gleaming grin, dark hair falling disheveled in front of his face, shadowing his flaring cat-eyes. “So what’s next on the list?” The stranger asked his voice velveteen and smooth, sweet as chocolate.
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I mean I really like that.
I'amber wrote: "Ohhh, I like it ^^I mean I really like that."
Thankies... For one of my characters, the guy with the green-eyes I'm trying to decide whether his name should be Vail or Jeremiah?
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I do too... But I like Jeremiah just as much.. Names give me a headache.
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I'amber wrote: "I agree, my fav. name for a guy is Ellijah, thats why I used in wrong one [:"Cool :] I like that name too... My favorite names for a guy would have to be Kierlan, Jeremiah, Vail, and I have some other ones... I don't know exactly why but I love the name Dae (its pronounced Day) And I got it from an icecream store... Sundae :D
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I'amber wrote: "Haha, I like that, Dae, it's cute ^^"The whole way home I was like: I cannot forget this. I cannot forget this. I cannot forget this. Lol, and this was the first chance I got to use the name, and I've had the name Vail for a few months now, and I like it a lot too.
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Aha, I LOVE names like I love goddess names to, and their meanings, that how I came up with Athean for 'where are you now' [:
I'amber wrote: "Haha, I would've been doing same thing.Aha, I LOVE names like I love goddess names to, and their meanings, that how I came up with Athean for 'where are you now' [:"
I kinda love coming up with names, and then I kinda think there a pain. Sometimes its fun, like the insperation for one will just it... Thats how I got Dae, I was all reading something in the ice-cream place and it was like: "Well... Thats a cool way to spell day-- Hell, it would make a nice name."
And I got Vail from driving through a city in Colorodo.
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And normally I get all mine from the greek goddess or I look up names with meanings and things [:
And my step mom has this baby name book, ahah.
Hey Amber! Here's the Phases cover that I made. I don't really like it, but... I need another opinion. Here's the link:http://fotos.fotoflexer.com/e919b71cc...
♥Jessica♥ wrote: "Hey Amber! Here's the Phases cover that I made. I don't really like it, but... I need another opinion. Here's the link:http://fotos.fotoflexer.com/e919b71cc..."
I like it :] Heres my edited version for TSD book cover:
http://fotos.fotoflexer.com/f8936691e...
Kriss wrote: "I'amber wrote: "I agree, my fav. name for a guy is Ellijah, thats why I used in wrong one [:"Cool :] I like that name too... My favorite names for a guy would have to be Kierlan, Jeremiah, Vail..."
I have a friend named Dae. :)
madison wrote: "Kriss wrote: "I'amber wrote: "I agree, my fav. name for a guy is Ellijah, thats why I used in wrong one [:"Cool :] I like that name too... My favorite names for a guy would have to be Kierlan, ..."
Cool :]
Aw, that's so cute, Amber! And Kriss, I luv urs! Where'd you get the pic for the person's face? And how'd you get a pic like that, anyway!? It's awesome!
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HAaha, thanks.
Hehe. Your welcome! I think it's adorable. It's a little teddy bear!!! =D Hehe.
♥Jessica♥ wrote: "Aw, that's so cute, Amber! And Kriss, I luv urs! Where'd you get the pic for the person's face? And how'd you get a pic like that, anyway!? It's awesome!"Thankies... I got the pick's from Photobucket, and then I went to fotoflexer and for the font i used picnik. :]
And I love your cover Amber, its so cute.
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Awesome! U r SOOO good at this! My brother was shocked when I showed him mine. He said it wasn't bad. And I said that yeah it was, and it was my first try. And he said that it especially wasn't bad for my first try... He seemed like he was telling the truth. From him, that's actually pretty high praise. Normally, he criticizes most of the stuff I do.
Yeah... I'm confused. I think he meant it... argh. brothers... *shakes head in way that says, "Ah, well, he's always gonna be that way."* lol.
*cracks up* I'm sorry, I had to do that. =)
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Night, [:
I'amber wrote: "Going to bed you guys!Night, [:"
Goodnight, sleep well ^^
I just tried out some poetry for the first time. Tell me what you think and give me feedback. I'll repost my link for you:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2443...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2443...
I'amber wrote: "Haha, I would've been doing same thing.Aha, I LOVE names like I love goddess names to, and their meanings, that how I came up with Athean for 'where are you now' [:"
Isn't it actually supposed to be "Athena"? I have friend named Athena. She is named after a goddess. Just wondering.
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Lol
hehe. I'm at the public library!!! I luv it here. =)
I love libraries...a place to think,read,write!
www.goodreads.com/story/show/46134.Vi...
I only have one story this is the link to the first chapter out of like 22 or simething