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message 1: by Julia (new)

Julia (juliahoover) | 33 comments Hi!
I'm seeking a beta or two to read two chapters (4700 words, 18 pages) for emotional response. I can give more background as needed, but the genre is fantasy and the background on the chapters is basically this - Demi-Angel (half angel) and son in hospital room. Demi-Angel has not told his son who he is. They work in a setting in which time travel is possible; the boy was injured at the barricades in 16th century Paris, but it really isn't relevant here. Demi-Angel sent son somewhere else --> son ended up at Barricades and was nearly killed --> now Demi-Angel feels guilty.

I'm looking for emotional response to these two chapters - they've already been beta'd and edited for grammar/spelling, etc., so it really shouldn't take more than 20 min or so.

Thanks,
Julie Hoover


message 2: by Julia (new)

Julia (juliahoover) | 33 comments (Also... clearly it won't mean as much as if you've been reading the entire book, I just need to know - bearing that in mind - where it falls on the "bored me to tears / couldn't put it down" scale.)

Thanks!


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