Hi! I've got a near-future lightly cyberpunk-flavored dystopia ready to go. Here's the working blurb:
Halcyon Slavic was raised on lies, and she knows it. Though she’s free to live out her legal, though seriously maligned Christian faith, she has a secret. At night, she watches the sky, tracking the city’s surveillance drones, and relaying information to her dangerous friends. There are things people aren’t allowed to know. When a drone appears at her window, she can only hope it’s not what she thinks it is. She’s not staying around to find out.
To escape the eyes in the sky, she flees to a strange neighborhood ,only to become caught between society’s two least-favorite out-groups—drone-snipers and Christians--two groups that aren’t even safe from each other.
Prowling the streets on stormy nights, Halcyon becomes a full-fledged drone-sniper. But the institutionally slandered Christians are trying to get back on society’s good side. Is it only a matter of time before those who understand her best stab her in the back?
I need it turned around by mid-September. It reads fairly fast. Any feedback is better than nothing!
Halcyon Slavic was raised on lies, and she knows it. Though she’s free to live out her legal, though seriously maligned Christian faith, she has a secret. At night, she watches the sky, tracking the city’s surveillance drones, and relaying information to her dangerous friends. There are things people aren’t allowed to know. When a drone appears at her window, she can only hope it’s not what she thinks it is. She’s not staying around to find out.
To escape the eyes in the sky, she flees to a strange neighborhood ,only to become caught between society’s two least-favorite out-groups—drone-snipers and Christians--two groups that aren’t even safe from each other.
Prowling the streets on stormy nights, Halcyon becomes a full-fledged drone-sniper. But the institutionally slandered Christians are trying to get back on society’s good side. Is it only a matter of time before those who understand her best stab her in the back?
I need it turned around by mid-September. It reads fairly fast. Any feedback is better than nothing!
Thank you!