Readers & Reviewers for a book with ZERO NEGATIVE REVIEWS: Once Upon A Time

[Kashif]

Hi Saurav,

If you are really looking for a detailed review, please email a copy to kashif.writing@gmail.com

Your story really started off well but there are minor mistakes that can distract the reader.

eg: ‘Yeah, exactly.’ replied Sahil as a broad smile evaded his face.
The full stop in the dialogue tag needs to be a comma.

I'd be happy to review one chapter for you!