Some thoughts on a query and long synopsis?

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Hello!

I'm working on a set of materials to enter a contest--a query letter, a short mini-pitch, and a longer (2 page) synopsis.

My manuscript is historical fiction, taking place during the Battle of Britain.

In total, the material is a little over 3 double-spaced pages. I'm hoping to get a few thoughts, and improve them a little before the contest. If you're willing to help me out, I can send you the document by email.
You can message me here, or at AWCardiff@gmail.com

Thanks so much for your time! Hope to hear from you.
-Anna