Dagmarth | Escape from Palmar | Requesting Constructive Criticism

[Joseph]

A coming of age story of breath-taking worlds, gruesome battles, incredible magic, and life-changing decisions.

I self-published this story, and am welcoming feedback on the story while its official cover is being redone.

If interested, respond with your e-mail address for a Word doc.

Thank you.

[Joseph]

Hi Alice, please confirm receipt of my e-mail sent a moment ago. Thank you for your interest.

[Joseph]

I'm sorry that my writing style didn't appeal to you. I hope that as my style continues to grow, it will help you enjoy my work.

[J.R.]

Joseph, I don't read your genre, otherwise I'd volunteer to give your manuscript a try. I'm sorry the person who responded to you was so rude, and I hope you find someone here who can help you with your story.

[Joseph]

Hi J.R., thank you for your response. I am posting the new cover soon which ought to help the appeal with the description. I decided to let reviews appear and then engage the comments that could help constructively improve the story.

[Lia]

Ditto what JR said about the previous response. So she didn't like your book - she didn't need to be quite so abrupt about it.

[Joseph]

Hi Lia, thank you for your response. It's no worry. My goal is reaching out to readers for exposure and connecting with readers to enjoy my story. I welcome all feedback, and appreciate the positive and do my best to improve from the negative as I am starting out.

[Lia]

I don't write in this genre but send me the first couple of chapters to lia@liapeele.co.uk. I'd like to get a flavour of it. Your reviews on Amazon look fine

[Joseph]

Hi Lia, I have e-mailed the first 30 pages of my story to you. Please confirm receipt.

[Joseph]

Lia, thank you again for your feedback. I have reached out to your referral and look forward to this potential connection as another step toward success for my book. It has been a pleasure connecting with you.

[Lia]

You're welcome Joseph. I wish you well.