Writing Passionates discussion
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Stuck in the begining, middle, or end
ah, it is the middle that screws me up... i run out of things to happen before the climax and I have to make what was planned to be a novel a very long short story.
I know what you mean! I know how I want it to end, but I don't know how to build up to it. I really want to finish it, but I don't know how. It gets annoying!

lol. I've never thought of that before. I might try it. Thanks!
Where ever you are right now, I can hear that horn of yours all the way in Knoxville Tennessee!
lol.
lol.
Well, thank you! *pats self on back*
I have pretty good vision too. 20 20.
But I really want glasses. They're awesome! Curse my 20 20 vision!
Sorry, I just ate brownies. I tend to get a little off subject when I'm high on sugar-y goodness. :):)
I have pretty good vision too. 20 20.
But I really want glasses. They're awesome! Curse my 20 20 vision!
Sorry, I just ate brownies. I tend to get a little off subject when I'm high on sugar-y goodness. :):)

Lucky!
My sister just got glasses because she is getting ready to get her driving license, and they look really good! Sometimes, I get really weird and just stare at her then she looks at me and says, "Mom, Katherine's scaring me!"
It's really funny.
My sister just got glasses because she is getting ready to get her driving license, and they look really good! Sometimes, I get really weird and just stare at her then she looks at me and says, "Mom, Katherine's scaring me!"
It's really funny.

:) I just recently found that out. I don't do it anymore though!!! You should be proud of me. :)
I, also, stare off into space.
I, also, stare off into space.
I stare off into space when I am thinking. And I look up. Or I close my eyes. I usually do that last one when I'm taking a test or doing my math homework and don't want to show my multiplication of things like 19*24. It is, by the way 456. And no, I didn't use a calculator and yes, I can actually do things like that in my head.
I love math! And you are very good.

That happens to me a lot!! I'm glad I'm ont alone on this. I will start a good story, but after a few chapters, I don't know what could happen next, or how to make it continue!!
AARGH. I get writer's block a lot, too. I always think of a story's climax first, then the beginning... but I don't know how to start it or how to end it. Sometimes it will last for weeks, and it's really frustrating. But after a while it eventually works out. :)
Sella and Brigid, I have experienced both of those things and I really hate them.

That's the same for me. I know how the beginning goes, and how the end will be, but I can't fill in the blank in between!



Same here. For one of my stories, I have this whole big scene written in the middle, and I have the beginning and sort of the end written, and I have to kind of connect the puzzle pieces and fill in the blanks.
what really helps me with my writer's block sometimes is meditating. it doesn't always work. but sometimes if I just sit and close my eyes for a few minutes, it can help. I think what works well is if you just let your mind go over all the options you have. you let your thoughts wander down different paths that your story could take. you start off by thinking, "okay, so what if THIS happens..." and you let your own mind come up with a few ideas, until you find a "path" that you like.

haha. yeah, kenzie that happens to me too while i'm falling asleep. i just keep writing and rewriting scenes from my stories in my head.
Same here. If I'll be stuck for a while, I'll lay down to sleep and suddenly the scene is writing itself inside my head. Of course, then my sleep is forgotten- I have to get up and write it all out. But hey, it was worth it!


I always write with chapters, too, unless it's a short story. Chapters make the book run smoother, and it's nice to have a break point. Also, they're great for suspense. And whenever I want a scene change but it's not time for another chapter, I just do the *** thing.
i always do chapters, too. it makes it easier to find certain parts in a story, if you want to go back and edit them or something. and like sella said, it's good to use chapters for suspense. and i also do scene changes with the ***.

the length of my chapters really depends on the book. Sometimes I'll write books where all the chapters are really long, and sometimes i'll write chapters that are only like a page. i guess if it's a more fast-paced book, it has shorter chapters, cuz everything happens so fast.
My chapters are always short. It just works that way. I still have yet to finish a novel though...
Most of my chapters are short, since I make them suspenseful and fast. Like the book I'm writing with Brigid, Moon Rise, all the chapters are about only one page, since everything goes ZOOM, ZOOM, ZOOM!

I usually get to excited with making the whole story (at least as much as ive written) perfect, descriptive, and exciting that i forget to think of a good idea for the end, and i go to the computer or the notbook (i cant use a note book very often cuz i get bad writers cramp lol) and i sit there, and sit, and sit, and sit until i realize that i have no ideas and that no ideas are coming to me. So then we i do actually get an idea (usually right before i go to sleep. Grrrrrrrr!!!) WHen i do get back on the computer the ending is almost always to abrupt, or to vague or just plain stupid. so yeah.... any ideas for what to do?
i usually suck at endings too. argh. although i think i might have a good idea of how to end soul stealer... i wish i could ask for opinions on it but then i would have to give it away. XD oh well. i'm really only halfway through the story at this point so i still have plenty of time to think about it...

Sorry, I'll stop now. :D

Thanks! Lol Im writing the end for my story actually! yeah
Its about these 4 kids who are like mutants, and they are crossed with different animals. and there are these other mutants (created for the purpose off hunting down the 4 original kids) that are tracking them down. Then one of the girls (the main character) has this dream and in the dream she basicaly dies, and her dream is her in the after death world. And when she wakes up she is in the 10th demention, but she doesnt know it. So she starts walking around and everyone around her is a skeleton even the other 3 mutants. So in the real world her friends are realy concerned because she isnt waking up, and she wont until she gets out of the 10th demention. But they dont know that she's in the tenth demention. And then they talk to some people and they figure out that they have to get into the tenth demention to save her. So they enter the tenth demention (i havent figured out how yet) and then the ending is still pretty vague. sorry if that ws confusing lol
Well don't worry, you're not alone!