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message 151: by Roeshawn (new)

Roeshawn | 4 comments There are hardly the right words to describe how wonderful working with Shalini was (or perhaps the words exist, but I haven't been able to string them together well enough)! She absolutely went above and beyond, providing pages of extremely detailed and considerate observations, and nuanced feedback for my manuscript, while being considerate of my feelings as a writer - a pleasant mix of constructive criticism and encouragement! I gave her 150,000 words to sift through and the turnaround time coupled with the quality of work was unmatched. I'll be sure to work with her again.


message 152: by Gregory (new)

Gregory Pettit | 4 comments Shalini provided extremely useful, constructive feedback on my 140,000 word manuscript. Her turnaround time, including reading the previous three novels in the series was phenomenal.

Shalini challenged my writing in such a way that I was finally able to see/acknowledge that several subplots were unnecessary, and several characters could go.

I appreciated both the thoroughness, and the sensitivity that Shalini demonstrated in her feedback, and I'd definitely use her services in the future.


message 153: by Thomas (new)

Thomas Zman | 7 comments Shalini has helped me numerous times now with my books. She is "very in-depth" as to her comments. Shalini's professionalism has shined through in every correspondence over the years. Her words are truthful and encouraging, and I greatly appreciate her guidance. Thank you, Shalini.


message 154: by Cy (new)

Cy Rena | 10 comments Hiring Shalini as a Beta Reader was the best decision I made for my Manuscript. She pointed out huge plot holes in my story, and her overall constructive feedback was on point. Her services are affordable and fast. Highly recommended!


message 155: by Drew (new)

Drew Holloway | 6 comments The feedback that I got from Shalini was excellent. She answered all of my questions and concerns with far more detail than I ever expected and I have a much clearer perspective how to fix the story's problems now.

She also gave me an incredibly comprehensive rundown of how she felt about the book in regards to plot, characters, writing style, pace, worldbuilding, and dialogue which was also very helpful and opened my eyes to a lot of issues I was missing.

The manuscript was returned to me now full of notes, corrections, tons of encouragement, and also some genius suggestions that I'd never even considered before. This was everything I wanted out of a beta reader. I have a much clearer view of what I need to do for my final edit and I am so much more confident about the book than I was before.

Thank you so much Shalini!


message 156: by Samscript (new)

Samscript | 3 comments This is my third time using Shalini's services. As always, she has been terrific. Timely, professional, and gives great notes for a low price. I highly recommend her, and I will continue using her services.


message 157: by Leslie (last edited May 29, 2022 10:17AM) (new)

Leslie Georgeson (lesliegeorgeson) | 4 comments I can't say enough about Shalini and her services. I've used her multiple times to help me polish up my manuscripts and she never fails to deliver quality work each time. Not only that, but she is affordable even for those on a tight budget. Definitely money well spent. She is someone who goes above and beyond to help writers. She truly cares. I highly, highly recommend her to one and all! I could go on and on, gushing about her all day, as Shalini is truly the best, and words simply cannot express my gratitude for all she does. Thank you, Shalini!


message 158: by Lori (new)

Lori Brand | 12 comments Shalini did a last-minute beta read of my psychological thriller, BODY WARS. She turned it around fast and had some very good insight, which I incorporated. My agent just sold it to Blackstone. I would highly recommend her.


message 159: by Nila (new)

Nila (digitalcreativepages) (digitalcreativepages) | 129 comments Lori wrote: "Shalini did a last-minute beta read of my psychological thriller, BODY WARS. She turned it around fast and had some very good insight, which I incorporated. My agent just sold it to Blackstone. I w..."
Lori, congratulations 🎊 That's brilliant news. So happy I could help you. Dancing in joy for you. ❤️


message 160: by Alexander (new)

Alexander Thomas (alexander_thomas) | 66 comments Shalini read my Crossover Epic Fantasy and gave me good on-the-fly feedback, as well as a summary document for the big picture on plot, characters, and more. Very useful feedback, highly recommended! I'll use Shalini's services again.


message 161: by Kat (new)

Kat Devitt (kat_devitt_author) | 103 comments Shalini always does an amazing job when assessing a manuscript. I have worked with her on short story manuscripts, which got her accustomed to a certain tone with my work. While she recently read a historical romance novel of mine for the second time, which does change up in tone to suit the genre, Shalini gave wonderful feedback on the manuscript's strengths and weaknesses. Of course, I will come to her again in the future.


message 162: by Leslie (new)

Leslie Georgeson (lesliegeorgeson) | 4 comments When Shalini gives you a compliment, you know it comes from the heart. Just like when she offers constructive criticism, you know it's sincere (even if it hurts just a tad). In today's world, it's really hard to find honest people, but Shalini is by far one of the best! She has now beta read/edited multiple books for me, and I can't imagine publishing anything in the future without her feedback. I highly recommend her services. Thank you, Shalini!


message 163: by C.W. (new)

C.W. Rose (galian84) I'm a bit late, as Shalini beta read my novel over the early fall. I so appreciated her services! She was prompt and timely, and her feedback was so thorough.

Though she was very candid and not shy about pointing out what worked and what didn't work for her, I really appreciated it. I took her feedback into consideration when revising my manuscript, and it's resulted in more full and partial requests.

Would recommend if you're looking for an honest and thorough beta reader.


message 164: by Remington (new)

Remington Arquette | 1 comments I have just received my Alpha Read from Shalini. I am working on my first novel and was advised about Shalini's talents. She is all she says she is, and then some. The thoroughness of her analysis was breathtaking. I now have a foundation on which to build my story. I intend on using her again once I have a second draft completed. Such insight and intelligence. She is truly a professor of literature when it comes to the dos and don'ts of writing prose.


message 165: by Aaron Hamilton (new)

Aaron Hamilton | 2 comments Shalini provided outstanding feedback after reading my novel, significantly contributing to elevating it to a professional level. Her invaluable insights not only improved my work in progress but also enhanced my skills as a writer. I would recommend a thousand times over.


message 166: by Cy (new)

Cy Rena | 10 comments Hiring Shalini as my developmental editor was the best decision I have made for my manuscript. She provided detailed feedback on every aspect of the story and found plot holes that my beta readers and I failed to catch.

She pointed out all the flaws in my work in a positive way. She was patient and truly cared about my writing voice. I worked with her for more than a year and witnessed how passionate she is about her work. I am extremely fortunate to find her here on Goodreads. She will be my editor for all my future stories.

I wholeheartedly recommend her as a beta reader and a developmental editor.


message 167: by Madison (new)

Madison Louw | 2 comments I Chose Shalini to beta read the first 5 chapters of my YA Fantasy novel - and was not expecting how absolutely incredible she would be. The advice she gave was thorough, to-the-point and helpful, and she left me with many avenues and ideas about how to take my book to the next level. When I am finished my manuscript, I will most definitely be coming back to her.


message 168: by David (new)

David Gray | 7 comments Sending many thanks to Shalini for the candid but very constructive review of my story. I think the suggestions are spot on and will help me when I dive into revisions.


message 169: by Virginia (new)

Virginia Burns | 2 comments When I think of Shalini's beta reading, the phrase that comes to mind is "tough love." She's kind but she doesn't mince words. She's a very astute beta reader, who can go straight to the root of the problem. Sometimes it may feel like a root canal, but she does it with a little novacaine so it won't hurt so much. But in the end, you're going to get a much better book. I appreciate her honesty. She's given me great feedback that will greatly improve my book. It's hard to take criticism sometimes, but we all need someone to tell us what works and what doesn't and give us a way forward. I'm back at it again, cutting out a lot of excess baggage, which should quicken the pace essential to my genre. Thanks to Shalini, I'll have a much better chance of getting published.


message 170: by Megan (new)

Megan Winters | 10 comments Hi Shalini,

Are you taking on new clients? My book is 115,000 and Women's Historical Fiction. I'm looking for a beta reader in mid-June.

Megan


message 171: by Nila (new)

Nila (digitalcreativepages) (digitalcreativepages) | 129 comments Megan wrote: "Hi Shalini,

Are you taking on new clients? My book is 115,000 and Women's Historical Fiction. I'm looking for a beta reader in mid-June.

Megan"


Hey Megan. Good morning. Yes I am.
You can contact me via https://digitalreadsmedia.com/beta-re...
If your DM is open here on Goodreads I can send you my email address so we can connect directly.
Shalini


message 172: by Leslie (new)

Leslie Georgeson (lesliegeorgeson) | 4 comments Manuscript completed? Check. Proofread? Check. It's time to send it to Shalini! She will point out any issues with plot, characterization, flow, grammar or misspelled words, and make note of anything that doesn't work. Shalini's beta reading services are invaluable and I highly recommend her to anyone who's seeking an honest beta reader. I always rely on her helpful feedback before publishing a new book. You can't go wrong with Shalini. Thanks Shalini!


message 173: by Jamie (new)

Jamie MacDougall | 1 comments Shalini was SO amazing when beta reading my 140k word romance/fantasy novel. She was extremely thorough with her feedback and provided excellent notes that really helped me to understand what my book needed in order to become successful. She provided an in-depth analysis of each character and each chapter, and it was JUST what I needed. I had edited my novel several times over the past few months, and I felt “stuck” on what else could be improved upon (although I knew it wasn’t perfect… it needed SOMETHING). Turns out, it needed another set of eyes from a professional reader, who was able to tell me where I was lacking and where I was thriving. She pointed out the negatives and the positives, and it made me feel like I was definitely headed in the right direction. With Shalini’s assistance, I now feel that I can make this book something even greater- and hopefully begin queries late this year or early next year.

THANK YOU AGAIN!!!


message 174: by Heidi (new)

Heidi Field | 1 comments I have used Shalini for a second time as her feedback from reading my first novel was invaluable. So much so, I have since signed with a publisher. I have just received her comments for my second novel and I am as impressed as I was the first time. She is so thorough, incredibly encouraging and offered wonderful guidance, explaining what a reader is getting out of the novel and what is missing, how my characters make the reader feel and where their behaviour or dialogue is inconsistent. She has highlighted where the plot slows or grates and she offers thoughts on how, as a reader, she would like the story to progress. I hope she does this for many years to come as I have a long writing career planned and I don't want to do it without her amazing insight and advice.


message 175: by Soheil (new)

Soheil Mirchi (soheilmirchi) | 9 comments I had the pleasure of working with Shalini on my latest manuscript, and her feedback was invaluable. She has a thorough understanding of narrative structure and was able to dive deep into the underlying themes of my story. Her insights helped me identify areas for improvement that I hadn’t considered, and she provided clear, actionable suggestions that have really strengthened my work. If you're looking for someone who truly gets your story and offers detailed, thoughtful feedback, I highly recommend Shalini. She’s been an incredible asset to my writing process.


message 176: by Leslie (new)

Leslie Georgeson (lesliegeorgeson) | 4 comments Trusting strangers (especially online) can be difficult, not just with your manuscript, but also with with your hard-earned money. But with Shalini/Nila, you can't go wrong. Her turnaround time is quick, her honest feedback is refreshingly detailed, her work is impeccable, and her fee is very reasonable. She points out any issues with plot, characterization, dialogue, flow, grammar...and even offers suggestions for fixing it. If you truly want to polish up your manuscript and make it the best it can be, then I highly recommend Nila. I have been using her services since 2018 and she is always my first stop before publication. Thanks again, Nila! I love your suggestions on this one!


message 177: by Gail (new)

Gail McGuire (raisedonfreedomgmailcom) | 18 comments I can recommend Nila's services as a Beta reader. Working with her was such a pleasure from start to finish. She is responsive, reliable, and pleasantly professional. Her work is outstanding. She offered highly valuable insight into opportunities to improve my manuscript in terms of character development, world building, and plot cohesiveness and authenticity. While also letting me know what I got right. I took away actionable ideas from her feedback that are truly Gems. I would seek to work with her again and recommend her highly.


message 178: by Lori (new)

Lori Brand | 12 comments Absolutely top notch. I've used Nila before for a previous book that I ended up getting traditionally published, and I believe her feedback was instrumental there.

Most recently, I submitted a speculative domestic suspense to her, and once again, her feedback was spot on. Nila has an excellent eye for detail, story, pacing, and character arc. She's kind, but she'll give it to you straight, which is what I want. Her keen eye has provided me lots of opportunities to tighten up my manuscript. She was also able to get me my feedback within a week, and a day early at that. She's exactly what one wants in a beta reader.


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