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This is a well thought out piece. I like your title and I really like the conversational style of your writing. The piece flows well from point to point as well. I would make two small changes. Early in the piece you write "would have never saw success". It should be seen.
In one area you mention a "white word screen" I think you should either capitalize Word, meaning MsWord or change it to wordless.
Overall,this is a very pleasant and informative piece. I look forward to seeing more! :)
Linda wrote: "This is a well thought out piece. I like your title and I really like the conversational style of your writing. The piece flows well from point to point as well. I would make two small changes. E..." Hi Linda. Thanks for the feedback. Always good to have a second set of eyes.Thanks for taking the time. Appreciated.
Hate to be the grammar police, but oopsie. God's one on only... I think should be God's one and only
Linda wrote: "Hate to be the grammar police, but oopsie. God's one on only... I think should be God's one and only"Thanks Linda, no worries, much appreciated... if a writer can't take it, he shouldn't write it. ...
where is that mistake by the way?


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