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message 4851: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You are going to give birth to the babies."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I know." She whispered. The pain over took her. "I can't see anything but black dots." She whispered.


message 4853: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He tried to take way her pain


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She felt her eyes close slowly. She wanted to scream in pain but she couldn't get her body to move.


message 4855: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments They had to get the babies out soon or they would all die.


message 4857: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Come on. Push." Said buddy


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She felt pain erupt through her but all she could do was lay there limply. She heard him tell her something but it wasn't clear.


message 4859: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Dana. Can you hear me?"


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't hear him. Her faced pale and she started to sweat.


message 4861: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack tried to take away her pain


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't know what was happening.


message 4863: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She laid there still.


message 4865: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments They didn't know what they should do


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She felt her heart slow down.


message 4867: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments They tried to come up with something


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She wasn't fighting like she should be


message 4869: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack looked at her worried


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't know how to fight.


message 4871: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack kissed her forehead


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She felt her heart slow down. She didn't want to die.


message 4873: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Buddy. What should we do?" Jack asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She laid there not moving.


message 4875: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy tried to help her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her eyes open slowly then they closed again.


message 4877: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her eye open again weakly. She looked at them. "Can I take a nap." She whispered weakly.


message 4879: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Not yet."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Why not?" She whispered. "Its so hard to do anything it feels like I'm burried under something.


message 4881: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You said that your water had broke. You have to give birth."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. She felt furious. She told them what was wrong and this is how they see it.


message 4883: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked back at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She closed her eyes as the darkness took over.


message 4885: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He tried to help her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She soon her breathing was almost to nothing and she didn't care. She felt like they didn't care about her.


message 4887: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack didn't want to let her die


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She felt herself slip away.


message 4889: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy tried to help her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She stopped breathing.


message 4891: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He tried to make her breath again


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She laid there limply for awhile. She felt her heart started again. Her heart was pumping. She open her eyes a little. "Tired." she said closing her eyes again.


message 4893: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack hugged her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her eyes open a little and smile some. "Jack i'm trying." She whispered.


message 4895: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I know."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head


message 4897: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I know you can do it."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I don't think I can. Can't he do a sea section?" She whispered.


message 4899: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I don't know."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Ask please." She said


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