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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She could always leave again. she didn't feel like getting hurt again.


message 4402: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He got up to walk after her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She wiped the tears off her face and got up. She went to the store and got some of what she wanted then she went to a dinner and got some hamburgers and fries.


message 4404: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments he walked around and looked after her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She ate the hamburger and fries and was still hungry.


message 4406: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments he tried to get her smell


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She would leave him again. She couldn't get hurt again.


message 4408: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments he walked around


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments The thought made her heart ache even more.


message 4410: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments it was hard to find her smell


message 4411: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments it was hard to find her smell


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments After she was done eating at the diner. She left to go back to Buddy's when she arrive Jack was gone. She sighed some. "Buddy would you mind cooking these for me."


message 4413: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy looked at the food. "I'm sorry. but I don't know how." he said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head slowly. She got up and started to make the food for herself. She was tired. She felt a little dizzy. She shook it off.


message 4415: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She stood there for awhile. Cooking the steak until it was rare enough for her. She put in on a plate. The world was coming down on her. She collasped on the floor. The plate shattered making a loud crashing noise.


message 4417: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy ran into the kitchen and looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her face was pale. She was under a lot of stress which was making her sick. Also she didn't have any real food in awhile.


message 4419: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He picked her up and took her to an room


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She laid there limply.


message 4421: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He put his hand on her stomach


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't move or make a noise.


message 4423: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He tried to help her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her breathing didn't slow down or anything.


message 4425: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He put a hand on her forehead


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She laid there not moving.


message 4427: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He walked out to call for Jack


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She wanted to open her eyes but they wouldn't open.


message 4429: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack came and Buddy took him to Dana


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Dana didn't move.


message 4431: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Dana?" Jack said worried


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't hear anything. She only saw blackness which she drifted further into.


message 4433: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy tried to help her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her eyes fluttered a bit but not opening.


message 4435: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He continued


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her eyes slowly open some but not for long before they closed.


message 4437: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Dana." Jack said and took her hand


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She heard her name. She wanted to say something but nothing could come out of her mouth.


message 4439: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He sat down next to her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She laid there not moving


message 4441: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy did his best


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her eyes open slowly. She saw Jack there. She didn't move or say anything.


message 4443: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack smiled softly when he saw her eyes


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked up at him. She closed her eyes again.


message 4445: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He kissed her cheek


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her eyes fluttered open again. Her face was pale. "Whats wrong?" She whispered hoarsely


message 4447: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I think you need to stay more calm." Buddy said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "More calm?" She whispered. "I was calm." She whisperd


message 4449: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Or maybe you need to eat more dead stuff."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "dead stuff?" She was confused.


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