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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She fell on the floor landing on her stomach. She looked up at him hurt. 'Your not Jack. Jack wouldn't try hurting me." She said. "Jack would give me what I want"


message 3952: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I don't want to die. plus you just worried over Allison. I am to. but you cant go and suck my blood however you want." Jack said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "I been trying to tell you that I can't kill you I was never bitten." She said.


message 3954: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Then why are you trying to dink my blood?"


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Because I'm thirsty and want blood." She said. She looked at him


message 3956: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "We won't give you blood."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "But I need it."


message 3958: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "No."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I need some blood." She hissed.


message 3960: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "No."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "My throat burns." She whispered


message 3962: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Drink some water then."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "It burns the water burns." She says


message 3964: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Water or nothing."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She still didn't get back up. She looked up at him. She was worried about he babies.


message 3966: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He helped her up


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Don't touch me you could of hurt the babies." She shouted. She didn't feel good because of the blood.


message 3968: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I'm trying to help you."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You going to kill my babies." She shouted.


message 3970: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I don't want to. I'm trying to be careful when you are biting mr."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Yeah sure you are."


message 3972: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I don't want to hurt the babies."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments The babies started to make her sick because of the blood. Her faced pale "I don't feel so well now"


message 3974: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He put her on the couch. "That's why you shouldn't drink blood."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "If I don't my throat burns." She whispered.


message 3976: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Drink water."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "It hurts when I drink water." She said.


message 3978: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You will feel better."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "It hurts though." She whispered. "Allison has to be okay." She whispered.


message 3980: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I'm sure she is. Allison is an really tough girl."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "My baby girl has to be okay." She said she was breaking slowly.


message 3982: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He hugged her. "I think she is."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was shaking some.


message 3984: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He tighten the hug

Allison slowly walked out from the forest


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Throat is burning." She said


message 3986: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Drink some water." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Help me."


message 3988: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy walked to the kitchen and came back with a glass of water


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I can't drink it though." She whispered.


message 3990: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack took the water. "I'll help you."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "Okay."


message 3992: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He tried to help her drink the water


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She started to struggled. The water her burned her. She screamed some.


message 3994: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He kept trying


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She swallowed some water. She started to weaken.


message 3996: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He continued


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was weak. "Blood." She begged some. She couldn't really move as the water felt weakening her.


message 3998: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her. "No."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him some more. "Please no more water blodd." She was a derlious.


message 4000: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "No blood. You can kill the twins."


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