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message 3251: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled in her sleep


message 3253: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He smiled at her. Suddenly he heRd someone was calling for him. He gently got up and ran to the camp to see what it was


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled in her sleep. She snuggled in the bed.


message 3255: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments When he got to the camp there was another dead body. Killed by the vampires


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Little did anyone know. A vampire snuck into his house and took Dana. It was a simple distraction to get her. They took her their camp.


message 3257: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at the body before he went back home


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She opened her eyes some. "Where am I? She saw the vampires. "Let me go." A vampire walked up to her.

"You are going to become one of us and so will your babies. Then your pericous mate won't want anything to do with you."

"Thats not true." Dana said. "Let me go." She shouted. The vampire slapped her across the face hard. She fell on the ground.

"Take her to the room and start her on some blood." The vampire said and they nodded and did that.


message 3259: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack walked in and saw a mess. Be started to look around.

Allison had been hiding. When she saw her dad she ran up to him. She cried and hugged him

"Allison? Why is it such a mess?" Jack asked looking at her

"They took her." Alison said crying.

Jack didn't need to guess twice to guess who 'they' was


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Dana opened her eyes slowly. She saw a vampire holding a glass. "What is that?" She asked.

"Blood. You will drink trust me you will like it." The girl vampire muttered.

She shook her head no. It was too late the forced it down her throat. She wanted to puke her guts out but didn't. They soon gave her a shot and left her alone. "He'll come for me."


message 3261: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack took up Allison and left her at Buddy's place to make sure nothing would happen to her to. The he turned into a wolf and ran fast to where the vampires had their camp


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Danas mind became derlious. She didn't know anything. She wanted some more blood.


message 3263: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He turned back to normal before he entered the vampire camp. He was furious


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments They gave her more blood and left her alone. Dana laid their out of her mind.


message 3265: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack was looking after her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "He will come soon."She muttered.


message 3267: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He tried to get her smell


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I want more." She shouted like a little kid.


message 3269: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He heard her and followed the shut


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments The vampire girl smiled and gave her some more. They gave her one more and shot and they walked out.


message 3271: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He came to where he heard the shout. He saw the door open and hide as a few vampires walked out.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was in the dark one room again and alone. Dana just laid there waiting for more blood.


message 3273: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments When the vampires was gone be sneaked in. He looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Are you here to give me more?" she asked.


message 3275: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He knew they had turned her. He he made his eyes glow blue and hoped she could see it was him


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Hes going to come for me and take me away from here." She said


message 3277: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Dana I'm here." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her eyes closed. She was slowly changing into a vampire.


message 3279: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He knew she was changing. He took her arm and bite her to see if that would help


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She felt a sharp pain. "Jack won't leave me here."


message 3281: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He glanced at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She hoped he would coming for her soon. She didn't know that he was already here. The vampires were going to be heading back to her soon


message 3283: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He hoped it would help to bite her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "More." She shouted.


message 3285: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her and put his hand on her mouth


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She struggled some but gave up. she didn't know who he was at the moement.


message 3287: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He stopped biting her and looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Give me more of that stuff they gave me I want more." She said.


message 3289: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "No." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her eyes widen and she hissed at him. "Give me more."


message 3291: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Dana I can't." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "They will give me more." She said,


message 3293: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I'm trying to stop this."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "If you were a smart person then you would get me out of here. My mate Jack will come for me he." She closed her eyes and slowly fell asleep.


message 3295: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He picked her up and hoped he could escape without being noticed


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She laid there limply in his arms. There was still time to reverse the effects of what they did to her.


message 3297: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He opened the door and quietly but quickly walked out from there


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't move that much


message 3299: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He ran to the forest


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She fluttered her eyes some.


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