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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her breaths picked up.


message 2952: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her body slowly slipped into coma.


message 2954: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy did as much as he could till he couldn't do more


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was stable for the moment.


message 2956: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack walked to her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She laid there not stirring


message 2958: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Dana?. He said softly


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her memories were back but she was in coma.


message 2960: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked worried at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments she laid their peacfully


message 2962: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He kissed her forehead


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments a smiled played on her face.


message 2964: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He smiled some as well


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her eyes fluttered some.


message 2966: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Jack what happened?"


message 2968: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You lost your memory, almost died a few times and scared the heck out of me under those times you almost died."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "So you love me?" She whispered


message 2970: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Yes. I thought it was pretty obvious when it came to that you scared the heck out of me with almost dieing."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled some. "I love you too? Does Ally hate me?"


message 2972: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "No. She don't."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Jack I really want to have another kid that I could be there with because I didn't get see so much with that I would want to>"


message 2974: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I understand."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled. "I'm better now?"


message 2976: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "We can wait a little till we are completely sure."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I know do you think Ally will let me call her that?"


message 2978: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I don't know."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "What happened to olivia?"


message 2980: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "She left."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Oh I'm sorry. I should of done that to." She whispered.


message 2982: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Yah. I got kind of Mac at her for taking out her anger on Allison."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I'm super sorry for leaving and I want a second chance."


message 2984: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "We can fix that."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled. "We can?" She whispered.


message 2986: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Yah."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She sat up slowly. "I know what will make me feel better."


message 2988: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "What?"


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "A get well kiss." She whispered.


message 2990: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I can give you one."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled.


message 2992: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He gently kissed her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She kissed him back.


message 2994: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He smiled some


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She kissed him a little harder


message 2996: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He sat down on the bed


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She pulled him closer


message 2998: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He smiled

Buddy walked out


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments she wrapped her arms around his neck.


message 3000: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He put his hands on her waists


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