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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She relaxed more. She felt someone let go of her hand. She knew who was. Her heart broke a little more/


message 2852: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He sighed some


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Tears rolled down her cheeks


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He took away the tear


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She clammed down some


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He frowned. He knew he couldn't stay and take care of her all day


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments The tears were dried up on her face.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He knew that he needed to get home a little fast. He had a feeling that Olivia was mad at them cuz the plate still was on the floor. "Listen Dana. If you can hear me. I just need to go home fast and check something. But Allison will take care of you. And I'll be back soon." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She heard some words but everything seemed so blurred. She just laid there.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He got up and walked home


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She felt something leave that she needed. Her eyes begin to water. She felt her breathing slowing down. She was going to die. She wouldn't be able to say goodbye to him. He would never want her. She started to slip.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments When Jack got home he opened the door and walked in

Allison took her hand


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her skin turned cold.

Olivia wasn't there


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack looked around after Olivia

Allison felt sad


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Olivia left a note saying she left them.

Soon her breathing was almost nothing.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He saw the note. He let it lay there it was. He ran back to buddy's house. He walked in and looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't move


message 2868: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He took her hand


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments He was there and she was happy. Her breathing soon was better than it was


message 2870: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He smiled softly


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She soon was stable.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Allison hugged Jack

Jack put one arm around her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments The color returned to her face


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her eyes fluttered some


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He smiled softly


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Jack what happened?" She whispered


message 2878: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I don't really know." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She winced at the pain. "My head hurts." She whispered.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Think about something nice."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You mean you?" She whispered


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "If I am nice." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Your sweet." She whispered.


message 2884: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He smiled at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She blushed softly.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Allison looked at them and smiled


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I love you guys I wish I would remember." She whipered.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You will remember soon." Jack said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Do you know how to make me remember?" She asked


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "No." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head and sighed some. "Okay." She whispered.


message 2892: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Don't worry. We will fix it." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Okay." She smiled.


message 2894: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Are you going to leave me when I get my memories back?" She whispered.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "No." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled some and jumped a little and tackled him. SHe was so happy. she hugged him. "Thank you." She whispered.


message 2898: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He smiled and hugged her back. "You welcome." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She snuggled into him. "I'm going to have to stay here?"


message 2900: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I think we can go home."


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