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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She wished he would hurry up.


message 2602: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack walked into her room and kissed her head gently. And woke her up by mistake. "Dad?" She said tiredly

"Sorry I didn't mean to wake you up. I leave you alone so you can sleep." Jack said

"No. Please stay. Don't leave me." Allison begged

Jack smiled and lay down in the bed next to her and fell asleep with her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was shaking. She knew it was still night time. She closed her eyes falling alseep against her protests.


message 2604: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments They both slept peacefully


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She slept some. She woke up in the morning with the sun shining in a window. She perked her head up. "Goodmorning Jack." She looked over realizing the events that happened and that she would never have Jack again.


message 2606: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Allison woke up she looked at her dad and smiled


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She whimpered some.


message 2608: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Allison got up and walked to the kitchen


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She sighed hated this feeling of dread inside. She got up slowly and went to the kitchen. There was beer and a butcher knife. She looked between the two options.


message 2610: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Allison looked after breakfast. She by a mistake dropped a plate on the floor so it broked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Olivia woke up and heard a crash. She got up and went to see what was wrong. She was steaming mad more at Jack. "You little brat broke the plate. You should stop making mistakes like your mom did with you and Jack. I want this clean up." She said and walked away.

She grabbed the knife.


message 2612: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack heard the crash as well and woke up he got up and heard what Olivia said. "Hey it wasn't her fault." Jack said and tried to defend Allison

Allison looked down


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Well you should of said something before you put a ring on my finger because you still love her. Just because you move on doesn't mean you still don't love her." She walked away and went to her room.

Dana was glad Buddy hadn't caught her yet.


message 2614: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack walked into the kitchen and helped Allison to clean up

Buddy woke up. "Dana? Where are you hiding? I hope your not trying to hurt yourself." Buddy said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Dana had the knife against her . "I love Jack." She whispered.


message 2616: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy got up and walked to her. "I know."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "And it hurts to know he doesn't want me anymore." She whispered. "Is he on his way? I don't know how long I can last before using the knife."


message 2618: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Just give me the knife." Buddy said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. She slowly put the knife out to him. "Is he coming?" She whispered.


message 2620: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He took the knife. "I don't know."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "can you call him please he said he would be here and hes the only thing familiar." She whispered.


message 2622: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Yes he said he was coming but not when."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "He has to come now." She said.


message 2624: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Let him take his time."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "No he has to come now." She said


message 2626: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Fine I get him."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled.


message 2628: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He walked out and called for Jack


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She waited.


message 2630: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack heard buddy. He took Allison with him as he walked to buddy's house


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled some. She was scared. She wanted him back.


message 2632: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments They came to bubby's house and walked in


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You came." She smiled happily. She ran up to him and hugged him forgetting everything he said earlier.


message 2634: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Um yes. We needed to get out from the house for a while." Jack said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I missed you so much I had really bad dreams last night that I was calling for you and you never came." She whispered


message 2636: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I didn't hear anything." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him backed away. "Never mind there is no use explaining that." She looked tired. There were bags under her eyes.


message 2638: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You look tired." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Like I said before I had nightmares all night I was calling for you in my dreams and you never came." She whispered.


message 2640: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I didn't hear anything." He said again


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Tears watered in her eyes. "As I said twice now I had a nightmare and I was calling for you in my nightmare and you never came. So no you couldn't of came because you weren't here nor were you in my dream." She said.


message 2642: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "That doesn't have to do with anything now

Allison took jack's hand


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You said I looked tired and I thought you would wanted to know why." She whispered.

((brb taking shower))


message 2644: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I said you looked tired and then you started to say why over and over again."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't want to agrue. She walked back a little bit. "You are not the person I remember."


message 2646: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I haven't changed that much."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "The person I know wouldn't say you couldn't hear me and explained why you couldn't several different times." She said.


message 2648: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "But I'm saying as it was. I didn't hear you."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I don't want to fight and I'm saying no duh because it was a dream." She said.


message 2650: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Can we just skip that topic for now?"


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