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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I told you already I only remember a guy name Jack saying he loved me thats it." She shouted. "Does that answer your question?"


message 2552: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Well Allison is your daughter."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "So I had a daughter with a person who doesn't love me?" She asked


message 2554: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I never said I didn't. I said I moved on."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "If you love someone you don't move on from that person unless if the love isn't real or the person doesn't feel the same way."


message 2556: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You left me with a kid I couldn't take care of."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I don't remember that so you can complain all you want but I don't remember that and I want you to be the person I remember the only thing I know about myself.."


message 2558: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I said I can help you remember stuff again."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Yeah well that you can but your only thing I remember and I can't even be with you the way I remember." She said.


message 2560: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "If you hadn't left me from the beginning then nothing of this would have happened."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Aren't you listening I don't remember that its like I never left and your the person who has change thats all I remember." She whispered.


message 2562: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I have listen to what you said."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Then why aren't you understanding where I'm coming from." She asked.


message 2564: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "If you are going to say that you don't remember stuff then I can go home. Just say if you want the help or not."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Can I meet this daughter I have?" She whispered looking down. She was hurting inside. "Most people would kill to have a second chance to make up for something they did and I figure you don't the second chance with me so I won't push it." Thats all she knew.


message 2566: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You can meet Allison tomorrow."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head


message 2568: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He nodded. "I'll better go home. I come back tomorrow and I have Allison with me."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head. "I'm sorry for whatever I did."


message 2570: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He nodded. "See you tomorrow."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked down and walked to the couch. She felt like the only thing she knew was a lie


message 2572: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He walked out from buddy's house and walked home

Buddy looked at Dana


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't know anything.


message 2574: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments When Jack came to his house he opened the door and walked in


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Shes upset she found out that lazy piece of crap lady who did nothing but ruin your and her life." Olivia said.

She started to cry.


message 2576: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I know. I didn't want to leave her. I wanted to hunt with her." Jack said

Buddy tried to comfort her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I'm not mad at that I mad at the fact that you were with no good for nothing person who hurt you. She should of never came back. I heard she lost her memory maybe thats good." She said.

Dana let the tears come down her face.


message 2578: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Yes she has. And buddy wants me to help her get it back." Jack said

"So so. Don't cry." Buddy said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Are you because she hurt you big time are you going to choose me over her?" She asked.

"Why not Dana?" Shouted.


message 2580: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I'm just going to help her and after that I'll go back to the life we had." Jack said

"You are Dana. I'm buddy." Buddy said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Do you still love her?" She asked.

"Why not me?" She whispered. "Why not me he should give me a second chance its like I woke from sleeping with him and hes not here anymore." Tears came down her face.


message 2582: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Do I need to say to you as I said to her?" Jack asked

"I don't have the answer on that." Buddy said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You do?" She whispered.

"I don't even know you all I know is him why can't he see that/"


message 2584: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I said I moved on." Jack said

"I have helped you thousands of time." Buddy said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Well have you move on?" She asked and walked out of the room.

"telling me and me remembering it are two different things?" Dana said she curled into a ball and let the tears come down her eyes and she soon fell asleep.


message 2586: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack sat down on the couch and sighed

Buddy looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Olivia went to bed locking the door and falling asleep.

She was crying in her sleep.


message 2588: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He lay down on the couch and fell asleep

Buddy tried to comfort her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She started to have awful nightmares


message 2590: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Jack please come save me." She muttered in her sleep.


message 2592: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy frowned and felt sorry for her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments No one came. She wanted the night to be over


message 2594: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy fell asleep


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments It was soon morning. In the middle of the night Dana woke up and just sat up all night from the nightmares that kept happening.


message 2596: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy was still sleeping


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She hoped Jack would come


message 2598: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack woke up. He lay there staring up at the ceiling


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She bit her lip shaking.


message 2600: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack got up. He walked to Allison's room and looked at her


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