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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Fine well I guess you can go have that father daughter time that you so wanted to have." She said in a whispered. She walked out of the room hurting. She looked at the butcher knife. She picked it up and went out the back door hoping no one saw her


message 2502: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Come on Allison. Let's get back to the hunting." Jack said. He turned himself into a wolf

Allison turned into a wolf and they both ran away

Buddy followed Dana


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She just waned to give up. The knife was shaky in her hands.


message 2504: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy looked at her. "Stop it."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. She dropped the knife and ran off in dark almost. After that everything happend fast. She slipped and fall hitting her head on a rock blood came out of it. Everything went black.


message 2506: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy picked her up. He took her inside and took care of her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't move much. Her eyes opend comfused. "Where am I?" She asked confused.


message 2508: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Your in my house." Buddy said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Okay but who are you and what excatly is that? And who am i?" She asked confused.


message 2510: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy wasn't early surprised that she had lost her memory. "I am Buddy and you are Dana."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Is there an important person who could help me get my memories back or at least fill in the blanks?"


message 2512: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Tell me what you do remember."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "um the last thing I remember is someone name Jack saying that he loved me/ Do I know a Jack/'


message 2514: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Yes you do know Jack."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Can I see him?"


message 2516: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "He can't right now."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Please if he loves me he will help me.'


message 2518: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I think I can get to him tomorrow."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head slowly/"Cant you at ;east try."


message 2520: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Sorry. But he has other stuff to do."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I don't think I'm gpoing to like this guy. If he can't make time for the person that he loves the he should make time."


message 2522: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "He's an alpha. And his spending time with Allison."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "At least call him for me." She said."If you tell him what happened he will come."


message 2524: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I do it tomorrow. He don't want to let Allison down again. I've heard of those times he have told me or when Allison have come."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I think this is more important i don't know who I am at all and you refuse to call the one person who does know who I'm." She shouted."Call him.'


message 2526: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy sighed and walked out and called for Jack


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled some. She will get to find out who she is and maybe find the guy who loves her


message 2528: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack and Allison ran to buddy's house. When they got there buddy explained everything for Jack

"Allison. Go home. I don't know how long time this will take." Jack said

"But dad. You said we were going to hunt together." Allison said

"I know but this is important." Jack said

Allison nodded and ran home


message 2529: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Oct 11, 2014 07:08AM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Dana sat there waiting. She wanted to remember this love of her life. Maybe he will help her remember


message 2530: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack and Buddy walked inside

Allison got home and walked in and sat down on the couch and looked down


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "What's wrong Allison?" Olivia sat down looking at her.

Dana hoped she would remember something.


message 2532: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Dad told me to go home cuz Buddy said that someone called Dana had lost her memory." Allison said

Buddy and Jack walked to Dana


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Olivias eyes widen. She knew who she was. Was he going to leave her for that girl. "Don't worry I will make sure he makes it up to you."

Dana swing her knees back and forth.


message 2534: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "We went to his house one other time." Allison said

"Dana. Here he is." Buddy said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Well I make sure he makes it up." She said.

"Hi my name is Dana I think that is what Buddy said. I don't even know BUddy." She said.


message 2536: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Allison nodded and felt a bit sad

"You know Buddy." Jack said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Olivia sighed some. "Its okay."

"I know you say that but I don't know him. The only thing I remember is you saying I love you. So I just wanted to know if you still love me."


message 2538: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Do you know who Dana is?" Allison asked

He didn't know how to answer. "It depends on how you see things."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Some girl who left your dad just after you were born." She said.

"Well since I don't remember I just want to know if you love me."


message 2540: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Does that mean she is my mom?" She asked

"You left me ten years ago." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "yes." Olivia whispered.

"I wouldn't leave the person who loved me and if I did I would come back to get the person who loved me back. All I want to know is if you love me so we can be together and help my memories get back."


message 2542: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments She nodded

" you did come back... After ten years. And I can only help you with your memories." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Olivia got up and walked to the kitchen.

She looked up at him. "I guess that answers my question. I guess I want my memories gone." Dana whispered.


message 2544: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Allison walked to her room

"do you remember Allison?" he asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I just told you want I remember and that is you telling me you love me but I guess it must have been a fake memory because I'm pretty sure the person who said that would love me still." She whispered.


message 2546: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "as I said to you erlier. I do. but I have moved on." he said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I think maybe its just that the person who I love isn't it you because the person would be with me no matter what."


message 2548: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "you left me." he said a bit loud


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I'm really sorry for confusing you with someone else." She whispered. "I just wanted to find the person I remember who loves me. Love last through everything."


message 2550: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I know that but now I want the answer on my question. Do you remember Allison?"


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