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message 201: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Even if I wanted to see you fall I couldn't let it heppen." He said and looked down at the ground with his hands in his pockets


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Yeah you could of let me drop." She said. "So if you want help or a friend then you could come with me."


message 203: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I'm going alone." He said without thinking


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled trying not show her hurt. "Thats fine." She whispered.


message 205: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I have allways been alone." He said and started to walk away


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was trying to be nice and it would be cool to have a friend. She sighed some and looked down she walked to her car. She went to it and sat there. tears were coming down her face.


message 207: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack walked into the forest. He was finaliy free.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She drove of to her house. She wiped the tears of of her face. She walked to her back porch and sat and watch the woods.


message 209: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack had just turned himself into a wolf. Now he needed to find some food. He walked outside of the forest as he allways did


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments The tears kept coming as she wiped them off of her face. "Stupid new kid." She muttered. "I was being nice to him an all I get is hurt in returned.


message 211: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack was looking for food. He looked away from the forest and notice he was outside her house


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She frowned some. Tears down her face. She didnt looked up from the ground.


message 213: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He could hear she was crying. He walked as quiet as he could to see why.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments she got up some. She walked in her house.


message 215: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack walking into her garden. He was to curious to see why she cried


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments she looked up to see her mom. "I know take the panic pills."


message 217: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He was sitting in her garden and tried to listen. He hoped none of her perents whould notice him


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "But I don't need them." She whispered. "I'm not crazy." She said.


message 219: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack walked a little closer to the house. He know he shouldn't but he couldn't help himself


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You know they make me crazy." She whispered.


message 221: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Just a little closer." He thought. He could almost touch the house


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Ok." SHe took her pills. 'They make me crazy." She whispered. SHe walked out on the porch and sat there staring.


message 223: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack tried to hide close to the house


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "They make me crazy." She shouted. She was zoning out.


message 225: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He tried to sneak away and hope she wouldn't notice him


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She saw him. "Pretty doggie."


message 227: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked up terrifed at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She walked over to it. She pet him gently. She was happy.


message 229: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He wanted to scear her. Even he know that wasn't her. But if he did something that would scear her. Her perents would come and he didn't want that trouble


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled some and pet him.


message 231: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Even if it started to get a little annoying he let her continue


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She stop petting him. "Yah they are gone." She said. She picked him. "Mommy and daddy are gone now."


message 233: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He was even more terrified now then he was before


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She held him against her. "Not realizing it was wild aniamal and they shouldn't be handle.


message 235: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He growld a little and hope she would let him go


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She jumped a little and put him down. She was frighten now and went in her house locking the door. She hid the tears till she reached her room. She thought she made a new friend. 'Doggie hates me." SHe whispered.


message 237: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He felt bad. He didn't want her to cry. He just wanted her to let go of him. He whimperd loudly to show he was sorry. He even let his ears hang down. He hoped she could hear him so he could stop. This made him feel stupied


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments SHe perked her head out the window. "Doggie not mad." She said. She ran downstairs. She smiled and pet him.


message 239: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He didn't want her perantes to know that she was crying becaouse of him. An wilde animal


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled and pet him.


message 241: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He know where this was going. He's stomach growld. He had totaly forgot to get food to himself


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Are you hungry>"SHe asked.


message 243: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He firades if she was avring like a chiled he could act a little smart. He nodded his head one time


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled and ran in the house and got a steak. "here you go." She laid it down for him.


message 245: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He ate it up fast and after that he liked himself around his lips


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments It was getting late and she was tired. She smiled some closing her eyes and she was tired.


message 247: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He was laying down but he didn't want to fall asleep. If any dengerus animal came he could save her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She closed her eyes. "I'm tired but its too far to walk." She said. She curled on the swing which was on the porch.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She startd to shiver some from the cold AUTUMN air.


message 250: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He stands up and walked over to her. He put his head on her and hoped it helped


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