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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She sighed some. She didn't say a word. So far so good. She looked at her little baby she missed her growing up. "I'm sorry I didn't know you would having company I should go." she said even though she wasn't fit to go any where really.


message 2402: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "no. you should stay." Buddy said

Allison looked at Dana and smiled some


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She gave a smile at Allison. "Fine you said you would call him." she told him. "at least say I'm better."


message 2404: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "yes I will I just give Allison what she want and then I will call for him." Buddy said

"where are the medicals?" Allison asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head some .She didn't look at Allison.


message 2406: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "They are in the bag is there." Buddy said and pointed at a bag

Allison nodded. She took the bag. "Thank you." Allison said and ran home again


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Now call him please." She whispered.


message 2408: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Sure." Buddy said and walked to call him

When Allison came home was Jack on his way out


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Dana was shaking some. She wanted to curl in a ball and die right now. Her heart beat was racing quickly.


message 2410: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy walked in again

Allison watch as her father ran away


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Buddy I'm scared."


message 2412: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Why?" Buddy asked

Jack ran to Buddy's house

Allison walked inside and put down the bag


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Because I don't what he is going to do."


message 2414: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Don't worry. Jack hasn't changed... So much." Buddy said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head.


message 2416: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack came and walked through the door


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was shaking she looked down.


message 2418: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Buddy. You better tell me why you wanted me to come." Jack. Said

"Yes Jack. This is important." Buddy said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments she slowly got up and went towards the back door. He didn't care. He never did. Tears sprung in her eyes


message 2420: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy looked at her. "Hey where are you going?" Buddy asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Because I have to go." She whispered shaking.


message 2422: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Why?" Buddy asked

Jack heard her voice. "Dana?" He asked and walked in


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Because." She whispered. Her head perked up some. "Well its nice that you see me and know that I'm here unlike earlier." She muttered


message 2424: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Why did you come back?" Jack asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Because I wanted to see if..." Her voice dropped off. "The reason I came back doesn't matter because it doesn't matter. Nothing matters you have someone now." She said.


message 2426: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Because you were gone for so long." Jack said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You hurt me so bad and it still hurts all the time." she whispered. "You lied to me and I came back here and you never loved me. If you love someone you don't go marrying someone else."


message 2428: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I loved you a lot. But I needed to move on and Olivia was always there and helped me when I needed it."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "So bye." She said. She felt like her world was coming down on her. "You are a liar you never loved me."


message 2430: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You can believe it however you want. I don't have time."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She took a deep breath. "Of course you don't you never did." She said


message 2432: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "If you have something important to say then just say it."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I wanted to say I love you but since you have such a busy time framing I will be heading out. Who knows I actually might have the guts to kill myself this time." She said


message 2434: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "So. I'm here to stop you from doing something stupid. Well then I say that you should think about Allison."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "No I thought maybe you wouldn't have someone else to lie but you know I'm wrong." She said. "Why she doesn't even know me I said it was a big mistake okay I was upset and when I tried to talk to you. You weren't home so I left okay."


message 2436: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "What do you think she would say or do if she got to know that her mother commit suicide?"


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I don't know. What would you say when you told her your the reason why?" She said.


message 2438: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You should at least be thinking of spending some time with her."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "What would she think of her mother that left because she was hurt by the person who she loved."


message 2440: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Just think about it. She would need it."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "She probably doesn't know and don't care she has her new mom and you have your new lover." She said.


message 2442: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "She will found out sooner or later."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Fine I will spend time with her and I will say what an awful person you are." She said. "You have no clue how much you hurt me when you broke that promise" She said.


message 2444: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "What promise?"


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "That you promised never to hurt me and that you would always love me."


message 2446: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Well I didn't stop either."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She stopped and looked up at him. Her eyes showed hoped


message 2448: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I just moved on."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked down looking down.


message 2450: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "If you excuse me I have to go."


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