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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Dana kept running he was coming.

She nodded her head


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He stated to ran and tried to follow


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She gulped. She was shaking in her knees


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He stopped and tried to sence the the smell


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She dove under the underbrush trying to her sent to stay hidden


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He lost the smell and walked back


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She jumped up and slowly followed him.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He walked back to the camp


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She stopped right there in a clearing. She smiled to herself and started to head back when she saw a vampire. She gulped and let a scream. She couldn't beat him she wasn't strong enough. The next thing she knew she was on the ground with the vampire on top of her. She screamed again.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He turned around when he heard the scream. He turned into a wolf. He ran and tackled the vampire


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments The vampire shot her with a sliver bolet before he could there she screamed in pain. Her eyes closed.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He he tried to bite the vampire


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She heard the fighting going on. Her body paled. the vampire smiled and dashed off


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He was breathing heavily and turned back to normal


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was slowly dying.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He saw her. He tricked her up and took her to buddy's place to let buddy take carer of her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was so cold. She wanted to shiver but the pain hurt to much


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Bubby took care of her

Jack left and walked back to the camp


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Dana laid there. "Bad dream." She kept repeating.

Olivia perked her head up. "Whats wrong?"


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "The vampires tried an attack." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head.

"Liar." Dana muttered in her sleep.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "we should try to find a way to make them stop." Jack said

Buddy looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Yes we should." Olivia nodded.

Dana felt the sliver come to her heart. Her eyes flew open and they were wide. She was going to die. She didn't have nothing left to live for no one cared for her anyways. She let the sliver take over and her eyes closed again."No one cares." She whispered,


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Right now I want to go home. I'll think of something there." Jack said

Buddy looked at her and tried to take out the silver


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Okay Allison is counting on going hunting with you tonight don't let her down." Olivia said.

She let out a faint scream. She writhered in pain someone save her. She could breath now. She stil didn't look to go she was stable but things can change.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "No I won't. But I can't give out any promises." Jack said

Buddy kept an eye on her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments she smiled some and kissed his cheek. "Love you." She said.

She didn't move/.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He smiled back. "Love you to." He said. "Now come on and let's find out what Allison is doing."

Buddy kept an open eye on her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Yes lets do that." Olivia took his hand and smiled.

She cursed herself she should of stayed here and she could of been with him. She didn't have to watch the one person who she actually love kissed someone else. And her daughter she would been able to raise her.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He squeezed her hand gently and started to walk

"Dana? Can you hear me?" Buddy asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled some.

Buddy? She heard him but she didn't answer she was to heart broken to do anything. She wanted to curl into a ball and die.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments he looked at her

"I'm here." bubby said softly


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "So we all heard a scream was that the vampire?" She asked.

Dana didn't say a word. No one was here for her. No one cared for her. Everyone always lied to her.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "no. the vampire got away." he said

buddy looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head some.

Dana wanted the pain to go away. She slowly blocked out the pain and the memories that made her hurt so much. What she did was very dangerous. You could tell she was using magic. Magic was suppose to be gone but Dana had a secret.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments he walked home

"Dana. can you please talk to me?" Buddy asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Olivia was happy.

The magic failed or maybe she just wished she could blocked out the pain but she couldn't. Tears came down her face. Her eyes fluttered some. She burst into tears crying


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack looked at her

"Dana. please talk to me." Buddy begged


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled up at him.

"He lied he never loved me he lied. I know I made a mistake leaving but he broke his promise never to hurt me." She sob through her tears.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments he walked up to the door

"calm down and tell me everything." Buddy said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was happy.

"I left him because he promised he never hurt me like everyone else did. Then he started not being there. After awhile he never was around and I missed him. He told me he was sorry and he loved me and that he always did. The only time he ever said he loved me when he was about to leave. I was so hurt and I left Allison with him and that was so hard for me to do. I thought I was going to come back after a couple days and I did but he wasn't around for me to talk to him. So I left then I saw him kiss another girl and it wasn't me. He didn't even stay with me to see if I would make it." She whispered.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He opened the door for her

"You since he became the alpha, he had been a lot more busy." Buddy said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She giggled some and walked it.

"Yeah well you know he lied I thought maybe he stilled loved me." She whispered.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack walked in after her

Allison walked out from her room

"I understand how you thinking. but why don't you talk to him?" buddy asked


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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Olivia sat down on the couch. "Before you go hunting today Allison I need you to get some medical supplies from Buddy's place."

"He wouldn't come. He has a family with someone else with my daughter. She whispered. "I should of never left it was a mistake." She whispered. "A big one and I want him back and my daughter." She said.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "okay. where are they?" Allison asked

"just try to talk to him." Buddy said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Buddy will give them to you." She said.

"Can you call him for me?" Dana asked.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "okay." Allison said and ran away fast to Buddy's home

"fine." Buddy said and walked out. when he came out he saw Allison running. "hey Allison. are you out on adventures?" Buddy asked jokily

"no I was supposed to get something from here." Allison said

"oh yah come in." Buddy said and walked inside again


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Dana's faced pale that was her daughter. She let go of the breath she was holding. She bit the inside of her cheek to keep her from moving or going up to her. She just sat still on the couch


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Allison walked in. she was smiling

"you look happy." Buddy said

"I am. dad said he was going to go out hunting with me." Allison said sounding exided


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