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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled some.


message 2302: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments When Allison was done she looked up at her mother


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She shifted and looked down at her picking her up. "Lets get you to bed."


message 2304: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Allison yawn a little


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She put some pjs on her and set her in the crib.


message 2306: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Allison fell asleep


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled and sat down.


message 2308: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't say a word.


message 2310: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at Allison


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I have to go." She said


message 2312: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Where?" He asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Away from here."


message 2314: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Is something the matter?" He asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Yeah you I stayed with you and still nothing it doesn't feel the same you are never around and now your alpha. You won't even talk to your daughter." She said.


message 2316: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I just have a lot to think of. The camp is still upset and worried over that attack. They don't want it to happen again. And it's my job to find a way to stop it. She I'm working hard and are trying to find a way to make this place safe." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "yeah well you just started being alpha today." She said


message 2318: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I know. But still." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "No but still you weren't there for a month." She whispered.


message 2320: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Then I was busy. I wanted to be there for you. I really wanted to." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You were never around there for me." She said


message 2322: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "But I wanted to. And I was there when you was given birth to her." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "Its not the same as it was before you maybe alpha but you have no powers or anything to make me stay." She siad.


message 2324: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I AM sorry. I know I sometimes do the wrong thing..." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Sometimes is an over saying it." She said. "I don't care you hurt me so much this past month its crazy and you came back on your word not hurt me." She said.


message 2326: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Listen. I don't want you to leave me. I love you." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You only say that when I'm about to leave." She said. "I don't feel the same way about you I thought you were that bad boy new kid from school who didn't like people who was caring only to me but then all that change."


message 2328: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Please." He begged


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "No." she said. "go get married to that girl that you were suppose to married. You can take Ally." She whispered. She turned around and walked out. She really wanted to believe he loved her but after everything it was hard to believe.


message 2330: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He got up and walked after her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She kept walking.


message 2332: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He grabbed her arm


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Let go of me why aren't you with Ally?" she asked.


message 2334: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I can't take care of her. I can't feed her, I don't even know what I should do." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Just leave me alone." She said.


message 2336: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He pulled her close


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She backed away.


message 2338: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Please." He begged


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "No I'm sorry." She said and ran off


message 2340: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He ran after her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Stop it I want you to leave me alone. I don't love you anymore." She said.


message 2342: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Can you at least take care of Allison? I don't have the ability." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Like I do?" She asked and waled off.

((hey I just had this idea that popped into my head maybe she leaves then comes back and he has a family and everything maybe ten years in the furture? And they refall in love))


message 2344: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her

(K. I like it)


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments ((Ok here we go if you could play allison I could play Jacks new wife))

Dana took a sigh it good to be back. She left everything behind because she was hurt and thats what she did. She walked carefully through the woods to where Jack stayed. Maybe he would forgive her.


message 2346: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments (K)

Jack was in the camp and gave out orders to a few of the werewolves


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She walked to the camp and saw him. She blinked really fast he looked happy. Then she saw a girl come and kiss him on the cheek. Her heart broke even more. He never really did love her.

"Hi sweetheart." Olivia whispered.


message 2348: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack looked at Olivia and smiled some money. "Hey." He sa


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Dana stepped back some trying not to make noise she stepped on some branches. She darted as fast she could

"What was that?" She whispered.


message 2350: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I don't know. But I'll go check and you stay here." He said and started to walk


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