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message 2101: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her. "I don't know." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You don't know." She whispered. "Maybe Buddy will know?"


message 2103: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Maybe." He started to think


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She relaxed some. "Do you want to say to your baby or touch my stomach?" She whispered


message 2105: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Maybe a bit of both."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled and sat down on his lap. "We are going to big one big happy family."


message 2107: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Indeed." He said and put his hand on her stomach


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked up at him. "I love Jack so much."


message 2109: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her and smiled


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments The next thing she knew someone came charging in it was one of the other wolves who were close to the alpha. "Whats the matter you have no right charging in here."

The girl rolled her eyes. "Its the alpha and the beta they are both dead." She said.


message 2111: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at them. "They are what?" He asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Jack what does this mean." Dana whispered softly.

"Yeah is chaotic down at camp there was attack from the vampires. We need a little leader Jack. Someone voted for you then so on. Your the new alpha." She said.


message 2113: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He sighed. "Fine. I'll guess I do it. By the way. Who voted for me?" He asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I have no clue." She said and left.

"Jack whats wrong." Dana asked.


message 2115: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at Dana. "The alpha has been killed." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Yeah I know so why are you sad looking?" she whispered


message 2117: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I just don't know what I should do."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Is this going to ruin our happy ending?" She whispered


message 2119: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I don't know."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Um you should go down to the camp and see whats going." She whispered.


message 2121: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He nodded. "Yah come on."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You want me to come with you?" She asked


message 2123: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Yes of course."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Okay." She whispered. "I don't think I will make that far walking I been having trouble all day get exhausted from walking a little ways." She said


message 2125: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Don't worry. I carry you if I have to."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I'm sorry I didn't tell you sooner its just that you seem really busy and I should stay behind I don't want to slow down." She said. She was actually in extreme pain but she didn't want him to know it.


message 2127: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "No it's fine. You should tell me stuff like that."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I'm going to stay here." She said.


message 2129: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Okay. I'll be right back. Promise."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head some. She winced at some pain.


message 2131: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He turned into a wolf and ran to the camp


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was hurting really bad but it was too late to tell him.


message 2133: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He got to the camp and he turned back to normal


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She let out a scream of pain. She wanted him back. Her faced pale.


message 2135: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments he walked around and tried to calm everyone down


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Maybe Buddy was home he was the closest. She slowly got up and made her way to Buddies about half way she collasped in pain.


message 2137: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments when he had calmed them down he walked home


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was in the middle of the woods at night time no one would come this way unless if they were going to BUddies house


message 2139: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments when he came home he noticed she wasn't there. he got worried


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Everything seemed to be spinning to her. She closed her eyes and when she tried opening them she couldn't. Her breathing was slowing down. Her face wrinkled in pain. She didn't think the baby could come this early. Then again she didn't know anything about werewolves


message 2141: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments buddy walked by and saw her and walked over to her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She winced at the pain again. she didn't know what was happening.


message 2143: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "what's wrong? why are laying here?" he asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She heard a voice but couldn't answer it.


message 2145: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments he picked her up and walked home


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was shaking some. She shivered. Her face was pale. "I think the baby is coming." She whispered thats all she could say.


message 2147: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments he walked in to his home and put her gently on a mat just in case. "do you think you can change form?" he asked softly


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I want Jack." She whispered. "I think." She closed her eyes and changed forms.


message 2149: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I don't think I have that much time. if you giving birth I need to stay here." he said and looked at her when she change. "okay. the pain should be easier to control now."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head some the pain was very easy to contorl now. She looked up at him waiting for what was the next step.


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