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message 1751: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Yes."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments The medicine started to take its affect. She started to relax some. "Jack I'm tired,: She whispered.


message 1753: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Just come to me and I'll take you home."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Jack I'm tired." She whispered


message 1755: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Just sit down I'll come and pick you up."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head. She slowly sat down.


message 1757: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He walked over to her and picked her up


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She snuggled into him.


message 1759: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He started to walk home


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled some. "I love you>"


message 1761: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I love you to."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments she closed her eyes


message 1763: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Promise me to never ran away like that again."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I wasn't running away." She said. She was drifting away from realitly


message 1765: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "What were you doing then?"


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I was leaving you I think." She whispered/


message 1767: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "But please don't do it again."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "Kiss me." She said changing the subject.


message 1769: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He smiled. "With plesiosaur." He said and kissed her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled and kissed him hard and pushed him against the tree.


message 1771: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He tried to match her kisses


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments she closed her eyes some and kept kissing him.


message 1773: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He rubbed her sides


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was happy


message 1775: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He pulled her close to him


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She kept kissing him.


message 1777: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He kept kissing her back


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments she smiled


message 1779: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He held her as close as he could


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She moved her hand to his shirt


message 1781: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He smiled


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She pushed away looked into his eyes.

((do you want to skip?))


message 1783: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked back at hers

(Doesn't matter to me)


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled and started to unbutton his shirt.

((Maybe we could skip to a month late and maybe he doesn't want kids and she is going to have a baby and is afarid to tell him?))


message 1785: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments (Ok)


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments ((can you start it off)0


message 1787: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments (Ok)

Jack was sitting and relaxed on the couch


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled some and walked in. She was happy. "Its so good a lot of the wolves are going to have pups." She said and sat down next to him..


message 1789: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Yah." He said a bit unsure


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Whats wrong?" She asked.


message 1791: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Kids never been my thing. And if you don't believe me then ask Buddy." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her faced pale. "Thats okay we aren't going to have any." She said. She smiled at him and kissed his cheek. Inside she was crying.


message 1793: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He smiled. "Then I can breath normally." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I"m going to go out a bit to get us some pizza." She whispered in his ears.


message 1795: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Okey. See you later." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled. She walked out the door and went to the woods. She ran quickly as far as she could. She sat down by a river as she started to cry.


message 1797: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Buddy walked by and saw her. He walked over to her. "Hey? What's the matter?" He asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked up and wiped her tears. "Nothing is the matter." She whispered


message 1799: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Why are you crying then?" He asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She bit her lip. "Because Jack is going to leave me." She said.


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