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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "no." She shouted. "i'm leaving and going to get something to get the pain to go away."


message 1352: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I know what I'm doing."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments SHe looked down walking away.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He grabbed her arm again


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She tried pulling away. She was upset. "Make the pain stop."


message 1356: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I will if you just listen to me."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "it has to stop." She said. She turned around looking at him.


message 1358: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "If you want it to stop you have to lay down and and relax


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head slowly


message 1360: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "So find a comfortable place and lay down."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "Hold me." She whispered.


message 1362: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I will." He whispered back


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She snuggled into him. She was weak. "I'm cold again."


message 1364: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I will do my best to get you warm again."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I don't feel good." She whispered.


message 1366: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You should be laying down."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "It feels like I can't walk." SHe whispered.


message 1368: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He picked her up. "I can take care of it. Where do you want to be?"


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "With you." She whispered.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Yes. But where do you want to lay down?"


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She shurgged her shoulders. Her eyes grew heavy.


message 1372: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Where?" He asked softly


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments :I don't know." She felt herself drift off.


message 1374: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He put her on the couch softly


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She closed her eyes. She snuggled into him some more. She started to relax.


message 1376: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He sat on his knees on the floor in front of the couch


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments The pain started to faded slowly


message 1378: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled some and opened her eyes."Hi."


message 1380: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Hi." He said and smiled back


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him and was happy. She felt a little bit better. Then she heard a knock on the door. "Whos that."


message 1382: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He got up, walked over to the door and open it


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Jack um its me Krestle." She said looking down. She left him two years ago.


message 1384: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Hi. What do you want?" He asked nicely


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "You promised kinda of to wait for me." She whispered.


message 1386: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Two years ago?" He asked and raised an eyebrow


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Well I was hoping you would you know how we were promised." She whispered.

Promised? She listened to the conversation. She didn't want to be there now. Her heart broke and the pain come back.


message 1388: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Um. It's not a great time right now." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him confused. "WHy not?"

She got up slowly and walked out the back door. She hated herself for thinking he liked her. SHe ran as far away as she could. She soon was out of the terriorty,


message 1390: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "It just isn't." He hadn't notice Dana walk away


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was soon crossing vampire territory. She didn't realize the difference she ran to a cave. She fell on the floor crying. The pain came back.

She nodded her head. "I'm sorry."


message 1392: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Maybe we can talk later or something. But right now isn't the time."


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head. "I understand I will be around for a while." She smiled some and walked away


message 1394: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He nodded and closed the door. He walked to the couch and saw that Dana wasn't their. He started to look all around his house for her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She laid on the cold hard floor crying.


message 1396: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments When he didn't find her he ran out and looked outside after her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She wanted the pain to be forgotten and gone. She didn't want it to exsist anymore.


message 1398: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He turned into a wolf and ran around trying to find her smell


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She wanted to die. She was dead inside nothing could fix it now. She was lost and had no hope


message 1400: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He had finally got her smell and followed it


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