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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I didn't fail." She said.


message 852: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I said that you were going to watch them ran away. Not eat kill one." He said calmly


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I didn't fail at all." She said.


message 854: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "To kill a rabbit like that is later class. But I clearly said. Just watch them ran and try to not kill anyone. Then I know you will have good self control." He said.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I didn't fail me but you." She said. She paused. "All it matter is me."


message 856: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "No you aren't the matter. You almost did good. I failed alots of times when I was training." He said and smiled some


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "it matters that I do not fail to me.' She said


message 858: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Let's see how fast you can run." He said and walked away from the rabbit holes


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't get up. She started chasing more rabbits.


message 860: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He turned around. He smiled some and just watched her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She got up some and ate more.


message 862: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He let her continue. Even he started to get one or two.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She licked her lips. She heard baby deer coming up. It looked so good.


message 864: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He saw what she saw. He wouldn't let her kill an baby deer


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She perked her head up licking her lips. She watch the deer walk by slowly. She got down and started to prowl like a preadtor.


message 866: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Wait. You haven't got in mind to kill a baby deer?" He asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him and nodded.


message 868: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Don't kill a baby deer. A baby deer is like a two rabbits. It's better to get and full grown deer." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She turned around at him and snapped barring her fangs snarling at him.


message 870: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He didn't let her kill a baby deer


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was angry at him. She wanted the deer. She looked at him snarling and growling at him.


message 872: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He took a few step back


message 873: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Jun 30, 2014 08:10PM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She wasn't in control or had no control. She was letting the wolf control her.


message 874: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You need to control yourself. I know it's hard but I know you can." He said. He was ready to run if he had to


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I am in control." She snapped at him which was a lie.


message 876: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "We have just gave you the power. You don't have control. Alpha gave me the resposebiletiy to train you." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She snapped at one more time before attacking him. She was angry.


message 878: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He Tried to not get hurt. "Listen. You need to control yoursel." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She kept snarling at him and biting him. SHe was angry. She convinced herself that it was time to let go and this was it. "I will not listen to you."


message 880: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He started to howl as help. He hoped someone would come


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Why don't you fight back." She said. "YOu say you like me but I hate you for hurting me." She said. Her eyes were wide. She was outta of control


message 882: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I don't want to fight you." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Then you will die." She shouted being not control. She wanted to get some revenge.


message 884: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He tried to protect himself and at the sametime he was howling for help


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was curious about everything. the others were coming. "fight back you can't hurt my heart anymore than you already did." which wasn't true.


message 886: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I don't want to fight you. I want to help you." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was shaking. One of the pack members gave her a shot to clam her down. She shift into a human and ladi there peacefully.


message 888: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He got up and turned himself to normal


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She relaxed. She needed to learn how to control.

'Keep her under control take babysteps with this one."


message 890: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I'm doing my best." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Yes we know take her to get rest."


message 892: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He picked her up


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She curled up into him. She smelt and heard so much. She was really confused about everything. She didn't have no contorl that is what she needed.


message 894: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He smiled and walked home. He knew he would have better control there


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She snuggled into him some more. She smelt him. She liked his smell. "Don't go." She whispered in her sleep.


message 896: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I wont." He whispered back to her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments she was sleeping peacefully.


message 898: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He got to his house and put her gently down on the cough. He put a blanket over her just in case


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled in her sleep. She felt the comfort of him go.


message 900: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked out. He needed to find a way to train her without almost get killes


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