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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments SHe smiled some and took a bite and ate it.


message 802: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He sat down on the ground and watched her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She ate up. Still hungry. She licked her lips.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I know that isn't much. But it is something." He smiled


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She walked to him and licked him. She wagged her tail.


message 806: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He laughed and pet her on the head


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She saw the tail and chased. She didn't know what to do with it


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments She was acting like a real dog. He find a stick and just needed to try something. He picked it up. "Look what I have." He said and hold up the stick


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments she saw a stick and tried to get. she was a new wolf. She liked it. She was confused about what she was.

"Fill her in she is your responsibility Jack." And walked away.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He nodded and saw when they walked away. "Okey. We will do this one time. And after that we need to start." He said and throw away the stick


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She ran after and caught it. She ran back with it.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Good. Okey. We need to get serious now." He said and smile some


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled some and wagged her tail.


message 814: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I'm gona try to get you as good as me." He said and pointed at himself


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She wonder if he had self ego problems.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "We can start with the hunting. It isn't always easy. But you need to control yourself. Remember the forst has alots of traps like Rock's, trees and even more." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head. She wonder if he was going to help her. Control herself. She heard a rabbit. She perked her head up.


message 818: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I can help you with the first few huntings. It is pretty hard to get control right awwy." He turned himself into a wolf


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She chased it. Not hearing him.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He started to run after her. He needed to help her. He tried to run up to her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She stopped and heard him. She wonder what she did wrong.


message 822: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I told you that I was going to help you with a the first few huntings. Not ran away just like that." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "But the rabbit." She said.


message 824: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "The forest is full of rabbits. You need to get more self control." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "They are good."


message 826: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I know. But if you can fix your self control you can get better things then a rabbit." He smiled


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "More things better than a rabbit" She said. She asked stopping.


message 828: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Yheah." He said and sat down


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I will see how much of self control you've got. Follow me." He walked away


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head and followed him. She heard tons of noises and wanted to look around


message 832: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I know were the rabbits eat, live and sleep." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "But you said there was better that rabbits." She smelt a aniaml deer. She stopped and went to it.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He walked over to her. "I know. But this is just a test that's why we are going to the rabbits and not to another animal." He sounded a bit angry


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked down. HEr heart broke in half. She nodded her head and walked in the direction he was heading.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments After a while they came to a place that had alots of holes in the ground


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She heard more noises. She wanted that deer. She stopped looking for rabbits not hungry for that.


message 838: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Okey. Here is hundreds of rabbits born every year. Thise holes are filled with them." He said and walked up on a rock


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head not listening to him.


message 840: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "In thies holes is enough food to full a whole pack and even more. You test it to just sit on the ground and watch them ran away." He said and smiled some


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head and sat down. But the smell got to her head. She thumped her tail on the ground.


message 842: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You need to keep an eye on them all the time. You need to consentrat on one thing. Forget all the sounds around you." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at them and focused on them. She was breaking inside. She looked at the wholes.


message 844: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He started to bark just to scear them and they started to run out from thier holes


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Her heart started to pump. She smiled some. She started to thumping her tail faster. She saw one come closer to her. She jumped up and grabbed it eating it.


message 846: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She licked her lips after she was done.


message 848: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He jumped down from the rock and walked over to her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She wagged her tail


message 850: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You failed and unfailed at the sametime." He said and smiled some


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