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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Hurry up we don't have much time." he said.


message 752: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He took her and walked slowly up


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She laid there gently.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I'm sorry." He wispered and started


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She laid there smiling in hre sleep


message 756: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He thought that she mabye would like her new life. She mabye even could understand what he made him feel sick and when he was talking to Buddy


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't wake up.

"Come on get it done." he said.


message 758: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He did the last part


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She felt so much pain come to her. She screamed in pain. Her eye opened they were bright yellow. She closed them and shivered in pain.

"Take her to her apartment. She will not make any contact with any pack members." They took her to the apartment.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack ran to his home. He thought that he had done a misstake


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She woke up confused. She picked up the phone and called Jack. "Jack its me um thanks for getting me out of the hospital." She said when no one picked up. Her heart broke why did she even like him.


message 762: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He listen to her voice mail. He thought tjat he could call her back. The rule was that she wasn't allowed to see him untill she got back. But nothing about talking in the phone. He tried to call her back and hoped she wanted to anwser


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't anwser him. She didn't want to see or talk to a mean person.


message 764: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Hey. I know you don't want to talk to me. But pleace. This is important. I can start with saying... I never took you to the hospital. If you want to know more pleace call me back." He put down his phone and lay down on the cough


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She picked the phone up. "PLease stop and erase this number because I don't want anything to do with you." She said angrily over the phone.


message 766: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You don't have to. But you need to listen. This is only about you." He said and tried to sound calm


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I don't care just leave me alone." She shut the phone off.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He was trying to leave another voice mail. "Okey. I know your angry for everything I have said. And now I see that you need to hear the truth. You know that wolf you have seen sometimes... Well it was me. I know that you might think that I'm crazy but it's true. Think about the eye color. Everything you had said to the wolf had you said to me. And if you don't belive me then I can prove it. I know that you like me. But at the sametime you hate me." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was beyond angry shut it up. She picked it up. "Just stop I don't remember much form last night and I know you think your a wolf but your not. so just please stop calling me and talking to me I hate you and you broke my heart." She shouted. She waited for him to say something


message 770: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I could prove it to you. But you are on an mission. And it's aginst the rules for me to see you until you have succseded." He said. His voice was a bit sad


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Just shut up." She said. She hated him right now. She hung of the phone angry.


message 772: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He wanted to help but didn't know how. He hoped someone was willen to help her start


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't know what to do. She felt like someone or something was hurting her indise. She was angry and wanted to destroy someone.


message 774: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments All he could do was waiting. He wondered how she would reaccted when she finds her new power


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She felt like something was calling her.


message 776: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He walked out and was gona try to get some food


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She shook off the feeling and sat down confused.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He turned himself into a wolf and ran out in the forest


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She started to feel weird. She sat up and walked out the door. She didn't know where she was going. She walked outside in the forest. She was in a clearing. She looked around confused and mindless.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He find a bunny


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments she saw a wolf and a bunny. Her stomach growled and wanted it. She stepped back making noise.


message 782: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked up at her. "Dana your out?"


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She stumbled back and heard the wolf talk. "How do you know my name."


message 784: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He turned himself to normal. He was going to show he wasn't lieing when they were talking on the phone


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Where did you come from and why are you here. I came here because I feel like I need to be here"


message 786: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I was hungry. I didn't know you were here. I swear." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I need to be here." She saw people come out. "Why are you guys here," She asked.

"YOu came home sooner that expected." THe alpha said. "Jack get the wolvesbane for her to change."


message 788: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He nodded and ran away to get it


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Wolvesbane?"She asked.

"Hurry Jack." HE said.

She smelt something. "What is that wonderful smell.' She said.


message 790: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He turned himself into a wolf and run to get it. When he find it he took it in his mouth and ran back to them


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smelt the bottle. "what's in it?"

"Take a sip." She took a sip. She felt so much pain.

'what is happening?" She whispered


message 792: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He turned back to normal and gave it to the alhpa


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments The alpha smiled some. "You need more my dear." He gave her some.

She turned into a white wolf after he gave her the drink.


message 794: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack looked at her and smiled. He thought she looked beautiful as a wolf


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was confused on why she shrunk. She smelled something. She saw a rabit and she looked at it.


message 796: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack saw that she was looking at the rabbit. He walked over to it and throw it to her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She pawed it some. She didn't know if she should eat it.


message 798: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Come on eat it if you want. I can fix a new one later." He said and smiled


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She wasn't sure about the food.


message 800: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Try it. I can promes that you will like it." He said.


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