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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She sat up gently. She was hurting all over. "You should of just let me die." She said.


message 602: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "But I don't." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't say anything. "I'm better off dead." She whispered.


message 604: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "No. I want allow that happen to you." He sat right next to her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Please get away from me." She whispered. "You have no idea what I'm better off as." She shouted.


message 606: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Mabye nit. But I do know you wont be dead as long as my eyes are open." He said and looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Then let me help you close them." She said.


message 608: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Um no thanks." He said a bit sceard


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "If I want to die you should let me die." She said.


message 610: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I wont. I care to much to let it happen." He looked down


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't have much social skills left since she was locked up. she had anger issues though.


message 612: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I looked you out from my world becaous I cared." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Your world?" She said confused. "It doesn't matter I'll be leaving soon anyways."


message 614: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Yes my world. And I don't want anyone to get hurt." He looked up at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I'm rested and I'll be leaving." She said. She got up.


message 616: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Wait. It's to late." He said and grabed her arm


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "YOu can't tell when or when I can't leave."


message 618: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I'm just thinking it's pretty late. And when it's late the forest is alive." He said and got up


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "No I want to leave."


message 620: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "It's to dangerus when it's dark." He said worried


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "So what you should of left me die." She said. She convinced herself if she pushed him away she wouldn't get hurt.


message 622: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I couldn't let that happen. You are a wonderful person. Why you want to kill yourself. I don't understand that." He said and looked at her with a bit sadness in his eyes


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Because I have no one and the one person I want doesn't want me back." She said.


message 624: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "And how do you know?" He asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Because he made it clear."


message 626: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "When?" He asked and looked at her serious


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "I'm just a girl he saved."


message 628: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Okey. I'm sorry. If I could get a chance to fix all the misstakes I have done I would." He looked at her with sorry eyes


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Stop giving me those puppy dog eyes." She said.


message 630: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Listen. I just want to start over again. I know I might not desurve it." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. She paused before she said anything. "Ok." She whispered.


message 632: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He smiled and looked at her. He wasn't going to be mean to her again and do the same misstake


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled back at him.


message 634: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Thank you." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "No problem." She said.


message 636: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments The door open and a wolf walked in


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She saw a wolf. She didn't freak. But in the back of her head she knew she was just a girl he saved.


message 638: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked annyoed at the wolf. "Really? You just needed to walk in now?" He asked the wolf


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Its just a wolf he can't understand you." She said.


message 640: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He just looked at the wolf. "Buddy. If you are hungry. Go out and find a bunny." He said and pointed at the door


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "No don't you have any steak or something instead of a poor helpless bunny."


message 642: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "They aren't so helpless as you think. Ask Buddy if you don't belive me." He said and looked serious at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Bunnies are cute little creatures that should not die." She said. 'YOu must have some type of food in there."


message 644: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Of course I have fo..." He got interopted and looked at Buddy like Buddy was saying something to him


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at them confused.


message 646: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "No Buddy I can't go with you. You mist go alone." He said to him


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "why can't you go? I was leaving anyways." She said.


message 648: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "That's why." He said and looked at her then he looked at Buddy again. "Buddy you don't have to be mean." He said


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments He was talking to himself and he was thinking mean things about her. "I'm leaving now." She said.


message 650: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He grabed her arm. "No you don't. It's to dark. And I don't want anything to happen to you." He said


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