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onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "OK if you could direct me to my room or place I be staying I would like to have some me time." She said.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You can take my room. I don't really have another room." He said quilty


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Ok um thanks you have a place to sleep right?" She said.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I can sleep on the cough." He said and pointed at the cough


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Ok." She smiled some and found his room. She locked the door. She sat on the bed crying. She hated herself for liking him.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He could hear her crying. Bit he didn't want to care to make her think that he is normal. He walked over to the cough. He picked up his blanket. He walked out to get ride of all the wolf hair. He didn't notice when a wolf walked in.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Why am I stupid fool for liking a stupid boy like him." She said.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He walked in an saw the wolf. "What are you doing here?" He asked him


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She sighed some. She was a nobody. She looked through his dresser for a knife. She found one. She smiled some. She took and put it against her heart.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "GET OUT!" He screamed to the wolf


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She heard him scream. She was just a burden to everyone. SHe dropped the knife. She couldn't kill herself. She looked at the window. She wanted to die. She felt like a fool.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He wolf talked to him in his way. "Hey I have a girl from my class that I just saved from the hospital.... No I haven't tell her anything. You know it's aginst the rules." He said to the wolf


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She heard him. She was just a girl he saved. That's all she needed to hear. She slipped out the window and ran. Taking the knife with her. She saw that it was getting dark. She took the knife and putting it to her heart she was ready to die.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments The wolf walked out and notice the open window. He walked back in to tell Jack. Jack went all crazy then he turned into a wolf to find her. He could almost feel her smell and follow his instingts


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She sighed some. She pressed harder not breaking skin. She fell on the ground crying. "I'm sorry I can't take it anymore. No one wants me I like him but all I am is just a girl who he saved and nothing else." She cut her arm to save the pain.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He could feel that she was close he ran around and find her. He throw himself to her and turned himself back to normal the half way. "STOOOP!" He screamed and landed on his stumach


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments she looked at him. "Leave me alone please." She said. She saw the blood trickle down her arm.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He sat up. "No I wont. And I don't even want you to hurt yourself." He said a bit worried. He could feel the smell of her blood


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Just leave me alone please." She begged. She was hurting. "Just go you hurt me enough."


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "What made you decide to do this to yourself?" He asked worried and lift up her arm


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Everything somethings more than others." She moved away from him.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Do I have something to do with it?" He asked he voice was worried


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "No." She lied.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Listen I wont let you kill yourself. I wont let another person that I care about die in this forest." He said sadly


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You made it clear that I'm just a girl you saved." She said.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I know. But that was just words that I said to friend. I needed to make him go somehow. Now I see that words are strong." He said and looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You can't just say something like that and hurtful words are true. I'm just the girl." She said.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I know I'm sorry. What do I need to do to show that?" He asked and looked sad. He had those Sad eye as he had first time he saved her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't say anything. She saw those blue eyes. She took a breath. "What are you I saw those blue eyes before where." She asked


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked confussed at her. "What?" He asked and lit he's head a bit


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I saw those blue eyes before. I saw your blue eyes before." She said.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You have seen my face before." He tried to make think of something else


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "No your eyes. Now tell me where." She said.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "School?" He took the first random thing that popped up in his head


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him and backed away with the knife. She cut her other arm. The pain left her.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Stop it!" He said. He was looking worried again


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "No." She said. "If I die now no one will miss me." She said.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I will." He said and looked down to the ground


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Remember I'm just the girl you saved." She said. "You don't want anything to do with me." She said. "I'm just the girl you saved." She shouted. She took the knife and put it to her heart.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You mean more to me. I know what I said. I looked you out becaous I didn't want you to get hurt. But insted I hurted you in another way and I reget it." He looked up and tears almost fall down from his cheeks


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She saw the blood on her arms. She felt light head. She dropped the knife and fell on the ground and hit her head off a rock.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He ran over to her and picked her up. He even picked the knife up so he could hide it. He run back to that house. He was going to help her. When they got to the house he put her on his cough. He didn't have any bandage so he used some of his shirts


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She tried to stay awake but nothing happened. She closed her eyes. She looked peaceful. Her head was hurting. She liked him. she was back in that whole and saw the wolf and the cat and the screams. She wonder what this was and who was this wolf.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He tried to wake her up but it was hard. He was worried and sceard


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She tossed and turned around. She had so much pain. Her eyes opened. "I had a dream about a wolf." She whispered in pain.


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "A wolf?" He asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Yeah.'She whispered. "My head hurts"


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He walked to the kitchen fixed a glass water and walked back to her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled weakly. "thank you."


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Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You welcome." He said and smiled back


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