Is this the correct place for one of these requests?
I've "finished" writing the 2nd book in my vaguely funny, sexy sci-fi series. This one is called Nate and Day, (Lunar Medical Book 2.) Genre-Erotica, Space Opera
Having survived a virus outbreak and a mutant attack on the moon, the crew have been sent out to re-establish communications between the planet and the moon base and to search for survivors. Their genetic modifications are still giving them various "emotional" issues, resulting in the random uncovering of certain body parts... They must arrive safely, escape strange indigenous flora, battle new enemy technology, find uninfected survivors and leave the planet, preferably before it blows up. All this, whilst trying to keep their clothes on.
I write some weird stuff!
Has anyone got the time or interest to read it through for me and see if I've dug any plot holes or misnamed characters?
It is a mere 40k words long which is half the length of the first book.
I have run it through both Grammarly and PWA, taken on board some of their suggestions and raised my middle finger at others.
I've "finished" writing the 2nd book in my vaguely funny, sexy sci-fi series. This one is called Nate and Day, (Lunar Medical Book 2.)
Genre-Erotica, Space Opera
Having survived a virus outbreak and a mutant attack on the moon, the crew have been sent out to re-establish communications between the planet and the moon base and to search for survivors. Their genetic modifications are still giving them various "emotional" issues, resulting in the random uncovering of certain body parts... They must arrive safely, escape strange indigenous flora, battle new enemy technology, find uninfected survivors and leave the planet, preferably before it blows up. All this, whilst trying to keep their clothes on.
I write some weird stuff!
Has anyone got the time or interest to read it through for me and see if I've dug any plot holes or misnamed characters?
It is a mere 40k words long which is half the length of the first book.
I have run it through both Grammarly and PWA, taken on board some of their suggestions and raised my middle finger at others.
Warning for violence, swearing and sex.