one-line haiku; my attempts

[Robbie]

Martin wrote: "snow brighter than the day moon between the caribou "

two thumbs up!

[Robbie]

Martin wrote: "the night air fills the loon's call"

two thumbs up, again.

Okay, I like them all!

[[deleted user]]

Martin Gottlieb wrote: "the old man and toddler sway between steps"

This I like enough to steal.

The old man and tot
swagger along together -
cute as buttons.